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Someone Comes to Town, Someone Leaves Town by Cory Doctorow
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Aug 17, 09

Read in July, 2009

The story is great, but it needs to be edited to become readable. The way it's laid out makes it too confusing. I felt that Doctorow pretty much forgot about one of the storylines for a while and suddenly remembered it existed, and got back to it not caring if it would fit in with the current setting or not.

The ending could be better as well, but wasn't awful. Probably just needs some editing and guidance from a more experienced writer to pull this off. His short stories are fabulous, which goes to show he's got what it takes.
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07/18/2009 page 190
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