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  <title>Please Step Back</title>
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  <read_at>Wed Jun 10 00:00:00 -0700 2009</read_at>
  <date_added>Thu Jun 04 08:55:50 -0700 2009</date_added>
  <date_updated>Wed Jun 10 11:28:38 -0700 2009</date_updated>
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    <body><![CDATA[I had heard some very positive things about the book (not the least being the glowing blurbs on the book itself from some excellent writers), but it just never clicked for me.  The writing style felt contrived, the characters never lived and breathed for me (despite the constant infusion of rhyming dialogue), and the story was pretty much like every VH1 <em>Behind the Music</em> you've ever seen.  I found myself struggling to keep engaged, which is a bad sign for a relatively short book filled with punchy dialogue (did I mention the rhyming?).<br/><br/>One additional note:  It's a very risky thing to present a character as an ingenious writer, and then to actually incorporate examples of 'his writing' in your text (in this case, the main character's lyrics, which are scattered throughout the book, and have the last word in the book itself).  It's risky because you, the writer, are the one creating this supposedly genius work, and if the work falls flat (which it does in this case - has Greenman ever written a song?  Hint: It's not like writing a story or novel), you have no one to blame but yourself.]]></body>
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