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A Conspiracy of Alchemists by Liesel Schwarz
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Nov 21, 2012

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Recommended for: Fans of SteamPunk, Fairytales, and cliches.
Read from December 07 to 14, 2012

DISCLAIMER: I received A Conspiracy of Alchemists as a publisher ARC through NetGalley in exchange for my honest review.

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Rating: 3.5 Stars

A Conspiracy of Alchemists follows air-pilot, Elle, and her warlock companion, Hugh on a quest to find her kidnapped father. Elle discovers that she holds powers she never even imagined in this adventure that takes place in a magical, historical, alternate universe.

This book starts out interestingly enough, pushing us straight into this universe with no explanation. I was able to pick up enough from the setting and character description to figure out some of the mythology going on throughout the book, but it took a while for me to fully understand what was going on. I ended up googling different mythology just to get an image in my head of certain characters.

The characters were very in-depth, I enjoyed the people I was reading about. Consistency could have been better. In the beginning of the novel, Hugh was a hardened gentleman with a snarky attitude but by the end of the book he had turned into a useless boy pining for a girl's love.

Everything seemed to move slower in this world too. Elle is determined to find her father (who she fears may be dead), but only after she's had her breakfast. Hugh and Elle travel to Venice to speak to the only people who can help them, but the first thing they do is check into a hotel. Once Elle is kidnapped, Hugh visits a few friends and checks into a hotel for a few days before finally freeing her. They just seem really calm in the situations they're in. Panic should be their first reaction.

And then, of course, in the end we have the inevitable 'bad guy reveals entire plan because, hey "you're going to die anyways"' cliche, that I did not enjoy from such an original novel. And we wouldn't miss the Prologue designed only to set up for the next novel. (which I really think it could have done without. This book would have been a great standalone novel, I fear the sequels will only bring it down.)

I was not overly impressed with the novel, but I didn't hate it. The world building was fascinating, if not a bit overwhelming. It's a good read, but not the top of my list.

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Reading Progress

13.0% "Confusing. Intriguing."
64.0% "The romance in this book is so discreet. I love Elle and her spunky determinism. She refuses to let romance get in the way of her goals.

As the novel progresses, I think it's earned more stars.

3.5 now"
79.0% "This book is extremely interesting now, it's flying by at this point. Definitely improves as it gets better, although it's still not an exceptional novel, it's a good story."
86.0% "This books is an editors dream. An intriguing idea wrapped in beautiful writing, but with a plethora of grammar and spelling mistakes. I wish I could take a pen to the first draft and tweak it to make it into a superb novel. At this time, though, it needs some work."
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