The only reason it's 2 stars is because it was a semi-interesting plot. However...
HOLY COMMAS, BATMAN!
The woman does not know how to write a normal sentence unless it's dialogue. She'd have these sentences with about 10 (no joke, I counted one) modifying phrases all contained within commas. It was so distracting that when I finally got around to the end of the original thought, I couldn't remember what she was talking about. So I'd have to read the beginning of the sentence, skip the crud in commas, then read the end. So much clearer. And the most annoying thing was that most of the time, the stuff wasn't even relevant! And a few times it didn't even make sense.
If you feel you can ignore all that the whole way through the book, please be my guest and read a cute story.