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The 33rd Year by Neal A. Yeager
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Nov 29, 12

bookshelves: giveaway, won-t-read
Read from September 04 to November 15, 2012

Rarely do I start a book and give up on it quickly. It didn't take long for me to feel that Yeager was breaking one of the major rules of writers - do not treat the reader as if they don't understand what it going on. Don't insult their intelligence.

After about the 10 page of over emphasizing his characters feelings, feelings, feelings with over use of adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, I just gave up, gave up, gave up.

I think the premise of this novel is quite good...the book just needs deeper editing...please, please, please.

Trust me, you will not see this book on a best sellers list anytime soon.
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