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Forbidden Touch by K.S. Haigwood
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Jul 25, 2012

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I am struggling with rating and writing a review for this book. On one had, I loved the premise and the main story arc. It was original and included some of the mystery/crime elements I enjoy in a book. I did not overly connect with the heroines interpersonal relationships, but I rarely understand why people love who they love and reading about people whose relationships baffle me is fun. As a reader, however, I struggled with some of the author's transitions from scene to scene. I have no problem with "head hopping" and having a story go from one person's perspective to another. I actually enjoy it. The problem I had with this book is that it just seemed to happen and I would think I was in one scene coming from one person's perspective and then all of a sudden I realized I was in someone else's head in a different town. I think this could have easily been remedied with some better editing, so I am giving this story a three. I would love to see this book re-released with a slightly different technique. Even those little symbols some authors have been using lately to differentiate between scenes would work.
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