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Time Between Us by Tamara Ireland Stone
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Jul 18, 2012

it was ok
bookshelves: net-galley, pub-date-2012, read-in-2012
Read from July 18 to 27, 2012

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REVIEW: Sigh. With all the glowing reviews I've seen on Goodreads, I had high hopes for this one. Poorly-paced with boring characters and plenty of melodrama, Time Between Us was "okay" at best and royally irritating at worst. I didn't hate it, but I didn't really like it, either. I thought about abandoning it several times, but I stuck it out because of the glowing reviews. If you are currently reading it and love it, then please carry on and ignore my review. But if you are reading it, wondering at the glowing reviews and thinking "surely it gets better," take my word for it: it doesn't. A few things I didn't like:

Nice-but-boring characters. The four major characters are all perfectly pleasant people who I might know or like in real life, but for a novel about something as exciting as time-travel, none of them seem interesting enough.

"It's all about Anna." It feels that way, anyways. I do appreciate that Anna has a life of her own separate from Bennett. She has multiple friends, a passion for running, supportive parents, and a bright future, so I never really understood her obsession with travel and worry over "being stuck" in her small town. Really, girl? You are only in high school; most people haven't done lots of traveling in high school. Her hopelessness that she'll "never leave this town" is completely silly. Doesn't she realize that after high school, it's all up to her? She's a spring-semester senior graduating in a few weeks--what does she think happens after graduation? Methinks she doesn't have as much "fight" as her friend Emma gives her credit for.

Drama. While Anna has plenty to keep herself busy, Bennett is a lot less involved in his own life and seems to live only for Anna. He's ready to leave his whole life, family, time period behind for some chick he's barely known a month. Most teen boys in a new relationship would run the other way if their new girlfriend got all pouty and dramatic the way Anna does. She really rakes him over the coals at times, all because he didn't tell her "everything." Get over yourself, Anna.

Sketchy details. I also questioned the premise behind Bennett's whole ability to time-travel. Seriously? He just decided one day to think about another place and time, and it worked? No other explanation? No time travelers in the family? No freak industrial accident? No ancient time-traveling rock? Nothing?

Slow pacing. With only one real conflict, Time Between Us barely had enough substance to sustain an entire novel. I didn't really care if Anna and Bennett could make their romance work, and I thought the stuff with Emma (if you've read it, you know what I'm talking about) missed a huge opportunity for a cool secondary (or even primary) storyline. I was more interested in the fallout of the Emma/Justin storyline than I was in the romantic outcome of two nice-but-uninteresting people. How disappointing that the story didn't better explore Emma's change of fate or the repercussions of screwing around with time.

I will say that I LOVED the abundant 90s music references, especially the lyrics to "If I Could" by Phish near the end of the story. I haven't thought about that song in forever, and I had to sing the lyrics over and over in my head to even remember it at all. Stone only includes the first few lines of the song, and it near about drove me crazy trying to remember the artist and title. Hoist was one of my favorite albums in college, and I had forgotten all about it.

Since I didn't really care for it and gave all kinds of bad vibes in my review, I think it is only fair here to include some the many positive reviews I've read. Here are two:

Review from A Storm of Words
Review from A Shot in the Arm

THE BOTTOM LINE: All in all, just okay. I've seen loads of positive reviews, so maybe it's just me. I don't think the book was bad, but I don't understand all the rave reviews, either.

STATUS IN MY LIBRARY: It's not yet released, so we don't have it right now. I may still get it, especially if students request it or it becomes very popular.

READALIKES: Before I Fall (Oliver); The Time Traveler's Wife (Niffenegger); Twilight (Meyer)


Overall: 2/5
Creativity: 3/5
Characters: 2/5
Engrossing: 2/5
Writing: 3/5
Appeal to teens: 4/5
Appropriate length to tell the story: 3/5


Language: none
Sexuality: medium--some kissing, nondescript references to "spending the night"
Violence: mild--a foiled robbery at knifepoint
Drugs/Alcohol: none

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