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Outsystem by Michael   Cooper
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Jul 31, 2012

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Read from July 26 to 31, 2012

First-reads book. The premise was good- a military intelligence and counterinsurgency major and a space vessel destined for a planet to colonize. There were some grammatical errors that interrupted the flow of the book for me. There were appendixes that helped with terms, places and names. What would have been more helpful for me is a list of the acronyms found throughout the story. Some of the acronyms remained a mystery until a couple pages later because they weren't in an appendix. The book was enjoyable but definitely not a favorite. It took me a few days to finish it because it wasn't one of those can't-put-down books. It ended with a cliffhanger that makes you want to tell the author, hurry up and finish the next book with Lt.Col. Richards.
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message 1: by Derek (last edited Sep 11, 2016 06:29AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Derek No, that cliff hanger mostly just made me want to say "wtf did you put that last chapter in here?" ;-) The story was over already. He could have just as easily made that the beginning of the next story: which is already included in the e-book, anyway!

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