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Suburban Task Force by Addison Towne
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Aug 18, 12

bookshelves: fiction, 2012
Read from August 13 to 18, 2012

I'm giving Suburban Task Force 3.5 stars. Since I can't do that in Goodreads I have to decide, 3 or 4. I'm going with 4 on the strength of the story. Its fun and light. If poured Clueless, Sex and the City and Die Hard into a story you would end up with this suburban housewife butt kicking tale.

But, the book desperately needs and editor. There is a pile of grammatical errors, primarily wrong words (there vs their), and odd punctuation choices including a ridiculous number of dashes. There are parts of the story that could use some tightening too. With that, this is would be a great book.

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08/14/2012
12.0% "Needs an editor. There are quite a few punctuation and grammatical (wrong word) errors."
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