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The Yellow Line by Kitrin Haas
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Jul 06, 12

bookshelves: 2012
Read on July 06, 2012

Great quick read! I was sucked in right from the start and felt really attached to Alana and Aspen. Devon's anger upset me quite a bit and just rubbed me the wrong way. However, the real reason I subtracted one star is because the editing was horrible. It lacked simple punctuation and had countless grammatical errors that should have been easily caught. There/they're were mixed up so many times I couldn't keep count. Very annoying!
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