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The Shadow Queen by Rebecca Dean

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Mar 12, 13

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Read from July 09 to 14, 2012

2.5 stars

You're telling me I went through all that and at the end, Wallis and Edward have only just met? Excuse me? I thought this was "A Novel of Wallis Simpson, Duchess of Windsor," not "The First Novel of How Wallis Simpson Grew Up, Married and Divorced, and Then, Two or Three Books Down the Road, Became the Duchess of Windsor." Grrr. Yes, I am disappointed. I figured the book would focus a little bit on Wally's childhood, devote a bit more to her first two marriages, but spend the bulk of the book on the courtship and romance between her and Edward. Instead I find myself slogging through pages and pages of Wallis's life without really getting to know her as a character, beyond the fact she was proud of her lineage and struggled throughout her life with poverty (stuff I knew from already from biographies). And when I reached the end of the novel, I find that Wallis has only just met the prince and, thanks to reports by other reviewers, that their story will continue in a sequel. Talk about bait and switch!

Don't get me wrong, the writing is well done: it keeps you involved in the story, the characters are well-drawn, and the dialogue is realistic. What annoyed me was how the characters were drawn, in particular Wallis. I get it: This is a historical fiction novel written by a romance novelist, but this was not the Wallis I expected. I was looking for a warmer side to the “cold fish” represented in history; I was not expecting a perpetual victim, a woman who resignedly accepts the abuse heaped upon her as being her due because she wasn't a “real” woman (according to the set up provided by Dean, which I'll get into later). I was not expecting, nor did it seem realistic, a Wallis who was simply looking for her Prince Charming and sighed with unhappiness every time someone else found their perfect man. Ick.

There are other issues with the novel. The first is Dean's habit of repetition, which can take a few different forms. The first is in her descriptions of Wallis: “her greyhound sleek body,” “her trim, athletic frame,” “her lithe body,” “her boyish, small breasted figure.” Alright, enough already, we get that she looks like a boy! Although it does go a long way towards explaining why the gay Prince Edward was attracted to her. Not only does he get a woman who looks very little like a woman, because of her sexual deformities (at least according to Dean), he doesn't have to deal with her nasty female nether regions, the thought or sight of which terrifies gay men. For that matter, vaginae terrify many straight men as well. What's up with that? Ooh, I think I'm digressing.... Back on point: Dean's repetition. She also has a tendency to use the “As you know, Bob” method (see the wonderful blog entry by Susan Higginbotham for an explanation: http://www.susanhigginbotham.com/blog...). Or, should I say, overuse; it seemed like every time I turned around, I was being introduced to information I was already well aware of. It's not as if the novel is that long or that convoluted, and while I admit readily that my memory is horrible, I think I can keep up with the fact that Corinne is married to a man named Henry Mustin or Pamela's friend Lily sculpted a bronze bust of Edward and was allowed to call him David. And I'm pretty sure other readers can do the same.

Lastly, and once again I realize this is a historical fiction novel, which means liberties can be taken with the historical record (as long those changes are pointed out/explained by the author at some point), but it just seems that what's left out or changed is... silly. Especially when it comes to the later parts of the book, where meetings or interactions have been left out. Why? Wouldn't they add to the story? I mean, Wallis and Thelma Furness became friends in 1930, before the dinner party Thelma and Prince Edward attended where Wallis met the prince for the first time, yet Dean has Wallis angling to become Thelma's friend after said party. Again I have to ask why; wouldn't them knowing each other beforehand deepen the connection Dean's trying to set up? And Dean left out completely Wallis's court presentation. Once again, why? After all, Wallis struggled and stressed over that as she tried to get the paperwork from her divorce in order in time and only managing to do so in the nick of time (and that only because she played fast and loose with the law). Wouldn't that whole scene have added to the Wallis character Dean has created, showing just how eager she was to meet the prince and possibly dance with him? Then again, I can see why other bits have been left out, those about Wallis and her many lovers, because they don't mesh with the vision Dean has created of Wallis, that of a frustrated virginal woman, who's simply looking for true love; a victim of poor choices and poor lovers/husbands. Not to mention a Wallis who, instead of being frigid as she was called by her contemporaries, had a legitimate reason for not engaging in typical sexual intercourse. According to Dean, Wallis suffered from a medical condition called a DSD (disorder of sex development) which would explain her rather masculine features and the hints she supposedly gave about her sexual activities, or lack thereof, with Win Spencer and Ernest Simpson. Now, Dean herself said that this was only a theory of hers, based on her research, but that, if it were true, it would explain a lot about Wallis. I don't have a problem with this; it's theoretically possible, though it doesn't jive with what I've read about Wallis. But it's certainly a unique diagnosis.

Bottom line? Like the blurb on the back cover states, the novel mixes fact with fiction (with more emphasis on fiction, I believe) to create an engaging novel, and although the book is technically well-written, even with its faults, I just can't rate it any higher, for the mere fact that I was sold a bill of goods upon which the book didn't deliver. Nowhere did the novel state that this was only the first book in the tale of Wallis and I feel rather ripped-off that, if I wish to continue with the tale Dean has created, I have to wait until the sequel comes out. That's not what I signed up for when I got this book.

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Reading Progress

07/13/2012 page 313
70.0% "The book's well-written, there's just something missing, but I can't quite put my finger on what that something is." 4 comments
07/14/2012 page 340
76.0% ""Corinne's husband, Henry Mustin, had died of pneumonia the previous year." Yes, we know who Corinne's husband is; we met him a couple of hundred pages back and saw him several times since. How short do you believe your readers' memories to be Ms. Dean?" 2 comments
07/14/2012 page 349
78.0% ""She was going to Peking and, once there, was going to stay with the Rogeres." Dean does that a lot with her sentences, chop them up when, with just a bit of a rewrite, she could say the same thing with less awkwardness."
07/14/2012 page 351
78.0% "She's gone from China already? What about her affair with Albero da Zara, naval attache to the Italian Embassy? Or her rumored pregnancy by da Zara and subsequent abortion which rendered her infertile? Oh, yeah, that doesn't fit in with Dean's mythology about Wallis's sex life. Plus there's still Count Galeazzo Ciano, a fascist whom Wallis was involved with WHILE STILL IN CHINA. Tut, tut Dean."
07/14/2012 page 352
79.0% ""'Is that what happened with the Rogeres? You were their guest for over a year.' 'No ... They were wonderful to me.'" Hmm, that's not what I've heard. According to a friend of Wallis's, she entered into a bizarre menage a trois with the Rogeres, creating tension, quarrels, and mutual jealousies. But that doesn't fit in with the Wallis you've created, eh Dean?"
07/14/2012 page 353
79.0% ""There was a lump in Wallis's throat (concerning Corinne's upcoming marriage and luck in finding a good man to marry)." Every time mention is made of Wallis's misfortune in love, I hear the Johnny Lee song "Lookin' for Love (In All the Wrong Places)" in my head (immediately followed by the Eddie Murphy parody--damn but I'm old)." 4 comments
07/14/2012 page 358
80.0% ""In the afternoon they visited the Metropolitan Museum, discovering, with pleasure, that they both shared the same taste in art." Dammit, she's doing it again! Sometimes an 'and' will work just fine, removing the need to mangle your sentences so."
07/14/2012 page 360
80.0% ""'My divorce is already finalized and yours will be finalized by the end of the year' (Ernest Simpson speaking to Wallis.)" Um, no. Simpson was still married at this time and wouldn't be served with divorce papers until after Wallis returned from her European trip with Bessie. Also, both of Ernest's parents were Brits, not just his father."
07/14/2012 page 370
83.0% "Geez, another instance of "As you know, Bob" (thank you, Misfit, for pointing out the name of that pitfall). Dean tells us about Pamela traveling to Snowberry to give Lord May a present from Rose, where she found out that intimates of the prince got to call him "David," all of it a needless repetition of information we received earlier in the book. It's just so ridiculously redundant."
07/14/2012 page 384
86.0% ""John Jasper introduced Benjamin Thaw...and his sultrily exotic...wife Consuelo, into their ever-expanding social circle." I hope it's just the sentence structure; Dean makes it sound as though Thaw and Consuelo are new acquaintances when, in reality, Wallis had known them for years."
07/14/2012 page 401
90.0% ""As Wallis expected, there was never another occasion when she could engage Prince Edward in conversation during their stay." What about the conversation she had with him the morning after his arrival, in which she was impertinent and the prince loved it? Seems like that exchange would've fit perfectly into the novel."

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Misfit This sure was misrepresented, wasn't it? And Wallis was so *meh*, even with the beatings from Win. It was like *just don't hit me where it will show*.


Lolly's Yes, and that's what pissed me off the most. I could've worked with the sappy romantic aura pervading the novel, though I still wouldn't have been too happy about it, but being misled like that is just too much. 'Meh' is right; that's why I described her as a victim. The Wallis I had pictured in my mind was more aggressive, more of a ball-buster. Not a wimp who would simply cower and say, "Please! Not my face, don't hit my face!" Sorry, nope, uh uh.


Misfit I notice most of the reviews coming out from Vine members are more positive than ours have been. I would be ticked if I bought this expecting the *rest of the story* and realized I'd have to wait for another book. Like with The Winter Palace: A Novel of Catherine the Great. How can you call it a novel of Catherine the Great when your narrator is a spy/servant peeping through keyholes and isn't even at the palace the entire time?


Lolly's Really? *goes to check* Huh. You're right; when I posted, there were a few 4-star reviews, but that number has grown since. I see a lot of them are going on about it being a great "beach read." I think you and I and a couple of others are in the minority for being upset that the book doesn't tell the whole story, which seems rather bizarre. I'm certainly glad I didn't pay good money for the book. Oh, don't get me started on The Winter Palace--that was the main thrust of my review, that the book purported to be about Catherine the Great, yet we really don't see that much of her. I could've gotten on board with the servant/spy narrator, if the author had just kept her at court. But when there's a whole section of the novel wherein the narrator has to rely on third-party reports and letters to "tell" the story of Catherine, you have to wonder what the author was thinking to have made such a poor storytelling choice.


Misfit It isn't the greatest book ever, but Annette Motley's book on Catherine the Great is a lot of fun, and at least she's better in her facts than what's-her-name was in The Winter Palace. IIRC Peter isn't terribly nutty, he's just a drunk.

Men on white horses


Lolly's Oh, yeah. This book popped up in my update stream when you posted your review of it. (I've been stalking you, I hope you don't mind. LOL) The only problem is finding a reasonably priced copy (and I think I'd need a stroke of luck along the lines of winning-the-lottery luck in order to find a copy at my local used bookstore). But I'll be keeping an eye out for it anyway; it'd be nice to read a fun novel about Catherine after The Winter Palace. If that's true, that'd be an interesting take on Peter; I always understood him to be an immature man-child. At least, that's how he's come off in biographies (which always made me extremely sympathetic to Catherine).


Misfit The hardback is spendy, but the MMPB is fairly cheap, http://www.amazon.com/Men-White-Horse...

Motley's take on Peter is hilarious at times, she has just the right touch for his nuttiness.

PS, don't mind stalking at all. Perhaps we should just be friends :)


Lolly's Ah, there it is! I was looking for a MMPB of the book; it's weird that that option didn't come up on the hardback page. Appreciate the link, especially in the face of Amazon's uncooperativeness. (Is that even a word? ;P)

Sounds good. :)

Is there a better way to start a friendship than stalking? LOL Works for me--thanks for the request.


Misfit Lolly's wrote: "Ah, there it is! I was looking for a MMPB of the book; it's weird that that option didn't come up on the hardback page. Appreciate the link, especially in the face of Amazon's uncooperativeness. ..."

I actually asked Amazon to combine the two, since my review and friend Michele's review were on two separate editions. But no, they said the individual sellers must have a reason for not linking them or some dumb reason.

That kind of stalking at GR is acceptable. I love making new friends here, thanks for accepting the invite and chatting.


Lolly's How silly! If the book were still in print, the two would be linked, not to mention the site is called "Amazon," not "A bunch of random sellers." Shouldn't Amazon have ultimate control over how products are linked? Oy.

Oh, good, especially since I tend to do more stalking/lurking here than anything else. I'm not weird (well, I am, but not in a creepy way), I'm just shy. :) You're welcome. I, too, love meeting and chatting with the different individuals here; though we all may have completely disparate interests, we all share a love of books, which is wonderful.


Misfit Lolly's wrote: "How silly! If the book were still in print, the two would be linked, not to mention the site is called "Amazon," not "A bunch of random sellers." Shouldn't Amazon have ultimate control over how p..."

I don't understand Amazon's mindset at times, but it is their playpen. It drives me nuts when they do that and then finally combine and ABC reviewer has 5+ reviews on the page after reviewing every know edition.

I love to meet new friends, but not everyone appreciates my *style* of reviewing so I generally wait to see how the conversations develop, or someone invites me. Kind of like the younger days when we'd wonder if we should ask they guy to dance or wait to see if he would ask...

Bad allegory, but it's late and it's bedtime.


Lolly's True, so I guess we have to play by their rules... no matter how silly they may be. I don't blame you; that would drive me nuts as well. *rolls eyes*

I know exactly what you mean, and your allegory is just fine. I do the same as you and tend not to do the asking, at least not until I know the other person's dancing style suits me (to continue with your allegory). ;)


Misfit Hah. Glad I asked this time. Welcome to my world :)


Lolly's Me, too! And thanks, it's nice to be here. ;)


message 15: by Elemillia (new) - added it

Elemillia Ucselub I LOVE your review! Not only is it thorough, but completely representative of the novel. I found myself laughing a couple of times because you are right on about certain things - especially that of the fact that the novel ends when they meet, and the repetitious style of writing... lol. Great job! Thanks for this wonderful review!


Lolly's You're welcome, glad I could entertain you, and thanks for the kind words!


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