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Vampire Cursed by Rachel Carrington
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Jun 24, 2012

it was ok
bookshelves: novella-romance, paranormal-romance

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I'm the odd man out with my review but I didn't connect. The moment the story started, it had a certain excitement that grips you. A cursed vampire whose 300 hundred years old and a damsel in distress from said vampire. What I liked about Abby and Nathaniel, was their chemistry and the mystery surrounding Nathaniel. The concept was good and makes you feel giddy to know what Nathaniel intends to do with Abby.

What I didn't like, which supersedes the likes. Was the flow of the story.  After the third chapter the fire and the connection was not their anymore. Although this is a novella, the story felt unfinished. Abby constantly stated she wants to leave and then the next minute she was in bed. I understand the story is centered around her and the curse but it felt like something was missing.  The concept felt right but the flow of the story felt wrong. I found my interest dwindling after chapter four when the excitement wore off for me and what Abby was saying kept on being repeated.

Story: FAIR
Intimacy Level: SWEET
Enjoyment: FAIR    
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