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The Mercedes Coffin by Faye Kellerman
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Oct 20, 08

bookshelves: adult-mysteries
Read in October, 2008

Faye Kellerman needs a merciless editor.
Do I really need to know what every character is wearing in every scene? Do I need blow by blow descriptions of every meal? Does it add anything to the story?
Nope. Just reminds me uncomfortably of "Twilight".

Kellerman would have been better off cutting out the endless descriptors and tightening her story. I found my attention wandering and wishing the whole thing would just END!
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