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By Royal Command
by Laura Navarre (Goodreads Author)
by Laura Navarre (Goodreads Author)
Ruth's review
bookshelves: net_galley, historical-romance, highland-medieval-tudor-ancient, covers-that-are-gorgeous, hit-my-face-with-a-wet-kipper, warrior
Jun 25, 12
bookshelves: net_galley, historical-romance, highland-medieval-tudor-ancient, covers-that-are-gorgeous, hit-my-face-with-a-wet-kipper, warrior
Read from June 10 to 23, 2012
This one, provided by netgalley, has got to be hands-down one of the most infuriating, intriguing and downright frustrating books I've read in a very long time. The first 40% of it is so gothic I felt almost compelled to pull out my grandma's white nightie and run around the house shrieking "Wo, is me!"
I'm going to write this one a bit differently than usual and start with what I didn't like so much:
- I really struggled to get over the writing for the first half-ish. It reads like something from the 80s, dreadful purple prose and that dire fake-Medieval speak that really annoys me, and just felt very clumsy, and was really very distracting. Interestingly, the writing REALLY got a whole lot better after the plot started to thicken (exception noted below). Even if I hadn't read the author's bio, I could easily tell the political stuff is what the author really gets her teeth into.
- The writing during the sexy bits was just not my thing at all. Too much use of phrases like "pulsing jewel", "searing blade of arousal" and "sheltered crevasse" were just too, too, well, too much! It felt so forced that I wasn't quite sure if the author was taking the p!$s or not. It spoilt my enjoyment and I personally found it so dire that if I had gotten this book from the library I might have thrown it straight into the DNF pile.
- The heroine is supposed to be (a) astonishingly smart (in a common sense kind of way) and (b) so attractive that all the men drone on about how she must be a "witch". Well, clearly she's smart because after all, if some bloke (built like a brick s$&thouse) forces his way into your bedroom, waving a rather lethal sword around (no, a real sword, not one of those!), and then proceeds to corner you on the bed, of course your first thought would be that he means you no harm. And, well, I got a bit sick and tired of being told she had bewitched all the male characters in the book. It was almost like the author was telling me to pity the heroine because she's so damned beautiful. Ugh.
So, why didn't I give this 1 star then?
- Well, I really liked the basic plot on this one. I loved the politics, the intrigue, the underhanded wheeling-and-dealing, and the way it clearly showed that a medieval king in the British Isles was really only one noble among many rather than the all-mighty ruler, and so had to be cruel and conniving. I have a real weakness for historical romances which manage to use politics and intrigue in a convincing way, and this one did.
- I loved, loved, loved that the heroine loves two men, and we get to see her romances with both of them, who are very different individuals. Now, I know that some readers have a real problem with characters going from one lover to the next, but it actually redeemed the heroine in my eyes. Her attraction and love for both men is credible and I loved it. I also thought both men were really great characters.
So, if you can get past the completely awful writing during the sexy bits, and you can stick with it, this is actually a rather different story, that I will keep and read again.
3 stars. I liked it, and just check out that absolutely gorgeous cover.
I'm going to write this one a bit differently than usual and start with what I didn't like so much:
- I really struggled to get over the writing for the first half-ish. It reads like something from the 80s, dreadful purple prose and that dire fake-Medieval speak that really annoys me, and just felt very clumsy, and was really very distracting. Interestingly, the writing REALLY got a whole lot better after the plot started to thicken (exception noted below). Even if I hadn't read the author's bio, I could easily tell the political stuff is what the author really gets her teeth into.
- The writing during the sexy bits was just not my thing at all. Too much use of phrases like "pulsing jewel", "searing blade of arousal" and "sheltered crevasse" were just too, too, well, too much! It felt so forced that I wasn't quite sure if the author was taking the p!$s or not. It spoilt my enjoyment and I personally found it so dire that if I had gotten this book from the library I might have thrown it straight into the DNF pile.
- The heroine is supposed to be (a) astonishingly smart (in a common sense kind of way) and (b) so attractive that all the men drone on about how she must be a "witch". Well, clearly she's smart because after all, if some bloke (built like a brick s$&thouse) forces his way into your bedroom, waving a rather lethal sword around (no, a real sword, not one of those!), and then proceeds to corner you on the bed, of course your first thought would be that he means you no harm. And, well, I got a bit sick and tired of being told she had bewitched all the male characters in the book. It was almost like the author was telling me to pity the heroine because she's so damned beautiful. Ugh.
So, why didn't I give this 1 star then?
- Well, I really liked the basic plot on this one. I loved the politics, the intrigue, the underhanded wheeling-and-dealing, and the way it clearly showed that a medieval king in the British Isles was really only one noble among many rather than the all-mighty ruler, and so had to be cruel and conniving. I have a real weakness for historical romances which manage to use politics and intrigue in a convincing way, and this one did.
- I loved, loved, loved that the heroine loves two men, and we get to see her romances with both of them, who are very different individuals. Now, I know that some readers have a real problem with characters going from one lover to the next, but it actually redeemed the heroine in my eyes. Her attraction and love for both men is credible and I loved it. I also thought both men were really great characters.
So, if you can get past the completely awful writing during the sexy bits, and you can stick with it, this is actually a rather different story, that I will keep and read again.
3 stars. I liked it, and just check out that absolutely gorgeous cover.
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Reading Progress
| 06/16/2012 |
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22.0% | ""His hand paused, a scant inch above her sheltered crevasse".. Her WHAT? The poor heroine has a frikkin' crevasse!? That sounds pretty painful and not something you really want to get within an inch, in case you fall in, never to be seen again!!! Someone please warn this guy. Urgently." 3 comments | |
| 06/18/2012 |
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33.0% | ""Searing blade of male arousal"?!!! Ouch! Sounds painful! Not the sort of thing I'd want waving around in front (or behind) of me..." 1 comment | |
| 06/21/2012 |
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44.0% | ""Abandoning all decorum, she moved against him as he stroked that pulsing jewel, her channel running slick with honey" Give me strength. Please. Or a large gin. Very large." 5 comments |
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Jun 17, 2012 09:44am
Crevasses (!) aside, I'm wondering what the time period of this book is. She's wearing a Tudor-ish dress on the lovely cover, but there's also a Viking warrior?
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Erica wrote: "Crevasses (!) aside, I'm wondering what the time period of this book is. She's wearing a Tudor-ish dress on the lovely cover, but there's also a Viking warrior?"It's set late 900s, in the reign of Ethelred (the Unready), so there were lots of Vikings running around still. Ethelred was the uncle by marriage of William the Conqueror who invaded in 1066.
I think the style of dress on the cover isn't quite right, though, so it's a bit misleading. I think that clothing would have been a bit looser than the image, with less of a stiff bodice (I'm not an expert, but that's what Wikipedia says!), and hair was covered with a veil etc. It's a nice cover though, even if not particularly accurate.
Vivian wrote: "Redemption review.PS. I loved the updates, Ruth. Cheers :)"
Thanks Vivian!
I love doing the updates, but I usually get so absorbed in what I'm reading that I forget.
This one really did redeem itself, but the writing style of the romance scenes just felt very dated and really let it down for me.
Sandi *~The Pirate Wench~* wrote: "Great review Ruth and your updates had me LOL! :)"Thanks Sandi!
Some of the sexy bits were so dire, I had to share my pain..
I really felt that if the sexy bits had been edited and toned down, it would easily been a 4 star read for me. Frustrating, or what!?
Ruth wrote: "Sandi *~The Pirate Wench~* wrote: "Great review Ruth and your updates had me LOL! :)"Thanks Sandi!
Some of the sexy bits were so dire, I had to share my pain..
I really felt that if the sexy ..."
Your pain is my laughter for the day:) Yes, that can pretty much kill a book for me as well,I would have got suckered into it by the cover for sure..I never learn:(
Sandi *~The Pirate Wench~* wrote: "Ruth wrote: "Sandi *~The Pirate Wench~* wrote: "Great review Ruth and your updates had me LOL! :)"Thanks Sandi!
Some of the sexy bits were so dire, I had to share my pain..
I really felt that..."
Nothing to be ashamed of. I get suckered by pretty covers all the time. Honestly, with editing and rewriting the sexy bits, this one would have been sooo much better.
I'm with Sandi--I'll pass on this one. But the updates were great. I don't mind the whole multiple partner thing, especially if it makes sense for the character or context. Reminds me of old Bertrice Small books, where the poor heroine ran through a dozen husbands before she found her true love(s).
Erica wrote: "I'm with Sandi--I'll pass on this one. But the updates were great. I don't mind the whole multiple partner thing, especially if it makes sense for the character or context. Reminds me of old Bertri..."Oh those poor heroines! They must have been exhausted by the time their heroes took them away to their HEAs!!
You know, apart from the dire crevasses, pulsing jewels and searing blades, there were parts of this book that I enjoyed a lot more than many HRs I've read, so I can't say this was ruined for me, but I do understand that the writing in the most sexual parts of the plot really is important. I'd personally rather take meh writing in the romance scenes than electric purple, but I really liked how the author worked medieval politics into the plot. It's something that most medieval HRs don't include, even though it's like a frikkin' free gift - all that double-dealing, conflict and general nastiness is just too good to miss IMO.

