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The Queen's Vow by C.W. Gortner

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Jul 30, 12

bookshelves: fiction
Read from July 08 to 30, 2012

Where I got the book: ARC from the LibraryThing Early Reviewer program.

This is a worthy novel by a popular writer, and yet somehow it leaves me flat. I suspect I'm not the right reader for this book; for one thing, I am rather tired of histfic about the crowned heads of Europe, even if--primed by The Tudors and Wolf Hall--I was receptive to learning some more about the mother of Catherine of Aragon, Henry VIII's first of many. I'd much rather read about an ordinary guy or gal for a change.

First, what was good. Gortner's prose is polished; he kept the huge cast of characters straight in my mind without throwing in obvious identifiers as a less skilled writer would. I felt I learned something about 15th century Spain, and it was clear that the subject had been well researched. The story spanned several years without jarring jumps forward (or backward), and I have no quibbles with the writing or the editing in general.

So why aren't I more excited? I would say reason #1 is that I simply never grew to like any of the characters, even Isabella for whom Gortner obviously has a great deal of sympathy. There was a tiny moment, when Isabella and Fernando first met, that I liked them both, but it didn't last. I felt flat, as if I knew who were the goodies and who were the baddies because Gortner told me so, but I never really felt either their goodness or their badness.

And nobody really seemed to grow. All those years, and they seemed the same at the end of the novel as at the beginning, with a few more lines, sags and gray hairs in their descriptions. Perhaps this was due to Isabella's voice, which was fluid and unvarying, so very rational and blameless and ironed out. Very like Philippa Gregory with the quirks of writing and the magical bits removed, and guess what? I found I missed the very things that irritate me about PG.

It strikes me that all these novels about royal women suffer from the same problem, which is that said women were very often far from where the action was taking place. Isabella was constantly waiting for Fernando to return from war, writing letters and doing administrative stuff it's true, but all the REALLY interesting events were happening offstage while Isabella popped out babies and worried about money. Perhaps it's time we started writing about the royal men rather than the women, but I think there's a prevailing fear that women readers (most histfic readers I suspect) won't identify with a male protagonist.

I thought the ending was a little odd, too. The story just seems to grind to a halt, with an attempt at reconciling past and present (view spoiler)[through Christopher Columbus, who pops up in a rather deus ex machina way (although historically accurate I'm sure, given the date we'd reached) to remind Isabella that nobody had thought she'd do anything much with her life either. (hide spoiler)] It didn't work for me.

So my rating reflects the fact that, while I liked learning about this unexplored slice of history, I wasn't thrilled by the novel as a novel. If it'd been nonfiction, I think I'd have rather enjoyed it as an Alison Weir kind of read.

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Reading Progress

07/08/2012 page 38
10.0% "I'm reading an ARC I got from LibraryThing, and trying to follow along with the Historical Fiction Connection blog's buddy read. So by Tuesday I need to be on p128!

So far, to be honest, I'm finding it a little bland. A bit like Philippa Gregory without the magic and sensuality. Lots of historical detail woven into a story rather than a story with lots of historical detail - does anyone get the difference?" 1 comment
07/08/2012 page 38
10.0% "I think the problem is that in many of these "life of [insert name of historical character here]" novels I can feel the weight of all that research pressing down on the writing and SQUISHING IT FLAT. I'd rather read a straightforward biography. Of course, right now Isabella is a teenage girl, so by definition not very interesting :)" 18 comments
07/09/2012 page 83
21.0% "There's way too much being-overawed-by-men in this."
07/09/2012 page 100
25.0% "I'm not connecting with any of these characters, and I realized why - they're two-dimensional (or even one-dimensional). The baddies are completely wicked, the good guys are completely good. Isabella is an insipid, passive goody-goody. I do hope she improves as she ages." 2 comments
07/09/2012 page 101
25.0% "So a character is telling Isabella she's awesome. Yet I don't feel I've seen this speshulness..."
07/09/2012 page 128
32.0% "Well, here I am at the end of Part I. Good things: the writing is very polished and I'm not having any trouble keeping the cast of characters straight, yet have not noticed any obvious identifiers. That denotes skill. Gortner covers several years in 128 pages without awkward jumps. Again, skill. Also hard work and good editing."
07/09/2012 page 128
32.0% "There is a feeling of 15th-centuryness, none of that modern-people-in-period-costume nonsense.

But I don't think I'm this novel's right reader. That person, I believe, is the reader who reads to learn and is less exacting as to how a story feels. I do think I'm learning about this period and these people. Yet my own preferences lean toward less polish and more passion."
07/10/2012 page 172
45.0% "Everything's all right now - she's got a man!" 3 comments
07/10/2012 page 194
51.0% "I swear this book would be much easier to read if I didn't keep hearing "there is something in the air tonight, the stars are bright, Fernando" in my head." 5 comments
07/30/2012 page 306
80.0% "I've decided to finish this one off...I feel like the author's making excuses for Isabella over the persecution of the Jews thing. Has anyone written a novel that shows the Jews' point of view?"

Comments (showing 1-13 of 13) (13 new)

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Jane A LibraryThing score... we shall see. Reviews looked mixed.


message 2: by Misfit (new) - added it

Misfit I anxiously await your thoughts.


message 3: by Misfit (new) - added it

Misfit I anxiously await your thoughts.


message 4: by Jemidar (new) - added it

Jemidar I'm holding of buying for a while because as you say, reviews are mixed.


Orsolya I like it even though Lynne wasn't crazy about it (I DO agree with some aspects of her review). I just put my review up. I gave it 4 stars.


Jane There's a readalong starting at the weekend on the Historical Fiction Connection blog, so I think I'll start it then. I'm kind of absorbed in Mrs. Robinson's Disgrace right now.


Orsolya I'm excited about that one! You seem to like it, too.


Jane It took me a while to become engaged, but now I'm relishing it.


Orsolya I look forward to your review.


message 10: by Karla (Mossy Love Grotto) (last edited Jul 31, 2012 04:34am) (new)

Karla (Mossy Love Grotto) Perhaps it's time we started writing about the royal men rather than the women, but I think there's a prevailing fear that women readers (most histfic readers I suspect) won't identify with a male protagonist.

And that makes me sad, that it could be divided on gender lines. Chicks want to read about chicks, and guys want to read about guys. Not this reader! I know I'd love to read about the guys for a change. :-\ But not have them be shiny and perfect and boring, please! If they had been that gloriously awesome in real life, history wouldn't be as messed up as it is. :P


message 11: by Jane (new) - rated it 3 stars

Jane Oh yes, definitely no glorifyin' of the menfolk. I think I'm tired of queens and royal ladies - they've been done to death.


message 12: by Susan (new)

Susan Thanks for the fine review. Helen Hollick has written some very good historical fiction about Saxon England. I am the Chosen King is the story of the principals of the Battle of Hastings told from the Saxon point of view.
Of course, she also does a good job with women, as in Forever Queen: Sometimes, a desperate kingdom is in need of one great woman.
N.Gemini Sasson did a trilogy on Robert the Bruce. Also a book about English Queen Isabella and Roger Mortimer.
Don't have much time for historical fiction that I enjoy so it is nice to learn which ones are only so-so. And I too am a little weary of queens and royal ladies.


message 13: by Jane (new) - rated it 3 stars

Jane Thanks for the interesting suggestions Susan!


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