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The Wish by Dahlia Lu
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May 31, 2012

it was ok
Read from May 30 to 31, 2012

This was a bit strange, I mean apart from the grammatical errors. There were a few scenes that were never explained thoroughly and made me wonder why they were included in the first place (the scene with the monk, what?). There were also several instances where I was confused as to what was going on.

Apart from that the heroine suffers from "everyone loves me syndrome" which is something I cannot relate to and makes the story a little bit silly. There is also some slight pedophilia going on, she's only sixteen when the story starts.

I don't plan on reading it again, it only peaked my interest as it was a devil based story (something I want to write about myself) and wanted to see how other writers had tackled the subject.

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If you do write a devil based story I'd love to read it!

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