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Fated by Alyson Noel
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Jan 31, 15

bookshelves: dnf, pub-date-2012, read-in-2012, slj
Read from May 27 to June 16, 2012

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REVIEW: I surrender! I just can't read one more page. For the first time EVER, I am giving up on a book and still publishing a review. I don't normally do that because I think it isn't fair to review a book I didn't finish, but in this case, I feel that I got far enough (197 pages) to review it with detail. There really was a lot I did not like, but to be fair, let the record show that I only completed 2/3 of the book. In the unlikely event that the last 100 pages feature a complete turn-around and it transforms into an action-packed, page-turning thriller, then please, someone let me know.

With a giveaway of Fated going on last week on my blog, I really wanted to like Fated. I was hoping I would be able to write a 4- or 5-star review, and everyone would be scrambling to get their hands on an autographed copy. Alas, I cannot honestly recommend it. I feel pretty bad about that because the publisher was so nice to sponsor the giveaway. The cover is gorgeous (can I PLEASE have those earrings?), and the premise of a girl who dreams of a world between life and death really sounds interesting. So WHY couldn't I like it?

For starters, I had the hardest time getting into Fated. The story is difficult to follow, and I was never really 100% sure why Daire needs to fight Cade and the Richters. Are they planning to kill someone? Take over the world? What is their "evil plan," other than to kill Daire, the last of the Soul Seekers? If they killed Daire, what then?

The characters hover somewhere between so-so and completely unlikeable. Daire, yet another YA heroine who is devastatingly beautiful and doesn't know it--ugh--whines excessively and constantly feels sorry for herself. She argues with her poor mother often, even as her mother really loves her and is trying her best. The constant bickering with her mother may be realistic, but it doesn't do Daire's character any favors.

Paloma and Chay are unique, but what kept Paloma out of Daire's life for 16 years? Wouldn't it have been much easier for Daire if she knew at age 16, she might see her dead father's severed head talking to her? I got pretty tired of the whole "I'll tell you later" and "You'll find out later" stuff from Paloma. This girl is kind of dealing with a lot--could you please give her some kind of real guidance? Daire knows enough information to ask the question; the least Paloma could do is give her something to go on.

The wooden romance barely has any spark. Dace and Daire don't even physically meet until more than halfway through the book, not that it really matters since, like Daire, Dace has no personality at all. And I got so sick to death of hearing about Dace's "glossy black hair." Do we really need to hear about it every time he appears in the story? And of course, it wouldn't be a YA paranormal romance without the "insta-love" that makes me so crazy.

Noel's writing style is descriptive, but it is seriously long-winded. Routine activities such as eating a hamburger, driving a long distance, crossing the street, and entering a high school take several paragraphs to describe. Nothing really happens in these scenes other than Daire eating or sleeping or walking, so I am not sure why Noel devotes so much time to them. For me, it bogs down the too-sparse action scenes, which were just interesting enough for me to keep reading (slowly, falling asleep after only a few pages).

It took me two weeks to finish 197 pages of Fated, and that was only because I "staggered" it with three other books I was more interested in. I tried really hard to finish, but I can torture myself no longer.

THE BOTTOM LINE: Disappointed. As much as Fated has going for it, it wasn't for me at all.

STATUS IN MY LIBRARY: I'm neither here not there with this one. If students request it, I'll consider it. The only content I am concerned about for MS students is that intense kiss right at the beginning of the book (just before Daire sees the floating severed heads).

READALIKES:The Mortal Instruments series (Clare); Gemma Doyle series (Libba Bray)


Overall: abandoned
Creativity: 2/5
Characters: 2/5
Engrossing: 1/5--helped me take two naps in the same day!
Writing: 2/5
Appeal to teens: 3/5--They might like it better than I did.
Appropriate length to tell the story: can't rate--didn't finish


Language: none
Sexuality: medium-high--an intense kissing with under-the-shirt groping and an unbuckled belt; in some of her dreams, Daire is either partially or totally naked in front of Dace
Violence: medium--severed/floating heads, story about someone who was decapitated
Drugs/Alcohol: mild--psychotropic drugs used to control Daire's visions

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07/17/2013 marked as: dnf

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