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The Red House by Mark Haddon

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Jul 10, 12

bookshelves: read-2012, contemporary-fiction, british-isles-theme-setting
Read from July 05 to 06, 2012

After attending several writing workshops in recent months, I've noted the popularity of fragmented, stream-of-consciousness writing among men of a certain demographic. White, aged somewhere between skinny hipster and the first thickening of the waistline, well-educated, enamored of morose, Sisyphean humor à la David Sedaris or, oh, let's say Mark Haddon. They write to a beat, disguising punchlines of angst in scattered phrases that connect like poetry but which strive to convey plot and character. It sounds really cool when read aloud; you get lost in the riffs and the rhythms of postmodern paragraphs. But I'm not convinced it makes for good story.

When a writer of Mark Haddon's skill approaches a story using similar techniques, you can count on something pretty remarkable. For within the randomness of phrases, the phrases that fall away to ellipses, the ellipses that join ever changing points of view, you are presented with warm, nutty, tortured and scarily familiar characters.

And the characters are what I adore about The Red House. In his latest take on Tolstoy's famous "Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way" Haddon reunites a mildly-estranged sister and brother in a house hidden in a remote Welsh valley. For the week's holiday at "The Red House," the siblings bring their spouses and children. Everyone's emotional baggage is packed tight with hang-ups, hurts, secrets and silliness.

The children sparkle with complexity and empathy. Their individual storylines and the prickly and sweet ways the author brings the characters together and plays them against each other rings true. I'm far less enamored of the relationships between the spouses, but the interactions between siblings- and spouses-in-law are hilarious and painful - hilariously painful - because they are so real. How awkward and anxious we are with those whom we are forced by blood or marriage to spend time. How often they are people we would never choose to befriend, but we have to figure out a way to love them, all the same. Haddon is a master of making readers fall in love with his characters, despite our better judgment.

There is no central protagonist or narrator of The Red House. The points of view shift rapidly between the four adults, three teenagers and an eight year old boy. Haddon explores their thoughts and in doing so, reveals their characters. It's not difficult to keep up or make the switch between voices; rather, it's a thrill being on the Haddon emotional rollercoaster.

But honestly, the fragmented paragraphs, the jittery sentences, the lists, book excerpts, the contents of a second-hand shop just don't work for me. Fortunately, Haddon eases up on the clutch as the book continues, and the jerky ride smoothes out, but I admit to a fair amount of skimming through these bits. They're boring. They read like those "Now, let's share our work with the class," moments when the bespectacled software designer wearing threadbare checked Vans spins out his clever three hundred word response to a writing prompt. It sounds just awesome, but is utterly incomprehensible and bears no resemblance to a story.

I'd go for 3 1/2 stars here. It's a good read. You can sift out the pretentious parts if you'd like. They aren't my thing, but they may be yours. The rest, we'll probably agree, is purt near pitch perfect.





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Reading Progress

07/06/2012 page 50
18.0% "Chopped sentences. Tedious. Affected. Random paragraphs. Shifting points-of-view. Excerpts from books read by characters. Meaningless. But damn if Haddon doesn't create characters you can't wait to watch go postal or get all Gandhi on you. We'll see. Major demerits for pretentious technique. Bonus points for setting." 5 comments
07/06/2012 page 107
39.0% "In for a penny, in for a pound..."

Comments (showing 1-10 of 10) (10 new)

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Julie Finished. Hmmm. Have to think about this one for a bit.


message 2: by Cathleen (new) - added it

Cathleen Really interesting review, Julie. I read and enjoyed A Spot of Bother so I assumed I'd enjoy this one, but now I'm not so sure after reading your second to last paragraph :)


message 3: by Cheryl (new)

Cheryl oh i love your first paragraph, you have so nailed it! A terrific review, Julie.


message 4: by René (new)

René Bespectacled software designer here thinking I need to get myself a pair of checkered vans.


Julie René wrote: "Bespectacled software designer here thinking I need to get myself a pair of checkered vans."
I swear, I swear, I did not have you in mind! Unless you ride a fixed gear bicycle, René. Then we might have a problem...


Julie Cheryl wrote: "oh i love your first paragraph, you have so nailed it! A terrific review, Julie." :) Thank you, Cheryl! It really is a great book- just a bit messy!


message 7: by Caroline (new) - added it

Caroline I love the concept of jittery sentences, and Haddon easing up on the clutch as the book continues! Such wonderful ways of seeing Julie :^)


Shevy Friedman-Moser Great review! My thoughts exactly!


message 9: by Kim (new) - rated it 3 stars

Kim Excellent review. Perfect.


Julie Thank you, Kim (and disgracefully belated thank yous to Caroline and Shevy)!


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