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Kingdom of Fire by Nick S. Thomas
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May 24, 12

bookshelves: didn-t-finish
Read from May 15 to 24, 2012

I liked the genre and the setting and the idea.
I just couldn't get past the writing.
It's a different world. It's a world with various pantheons of gods. So I'm really taken out of the book when the protagonist says "Jesus, he's fast!" It doesn't fit.
The writing over all felt very "first novel before the editor saw it and maybe a draft or two after rough." It severely needed tightening up.
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