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The Phoenix Egg by Richard A. Bamberg
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Sep 10, 2008

it was ok
Read in September, 2008

Caitlin Maxwell and her soon-to-be ex-husband own a technology company. While they’re talking on the phone, Scott is run off of the road and killed in a car accident. Soon after, Caitlin finds herself being hunted by Japanese businessmen, French businessmen and the federal government. She discovers that Scott has left something behind that they all want, so she turns to an old friend for help.

The Phoenix Egg was written by Richard Bamberg and published by Invisible College Press. I didn’t love this book, but I didn’t hate it either. I think it has potential, but it needs a good edit. There are lots of sentences like this one in the book - “Him aimed for the center of the wall and squeezed off six quick rounds.” At one point, the main character’s name was wrong. The plot got lost in descriptions and technicalities a few times. I felt like these things detracted from the book.
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Richard Thank you for the honest critique. I don't use that publisher anymore for the editing reasons you mentioned. I will attempt to make sure anything else of mine you see is as error free as it can be. Thank you. Richard

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