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A Confusion of Princes by Garth Nix

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Apr 23, 12

bookshelves: space-adventure, science-fiction
Read from April 21 to 23, 2012

Khemri is one of ten million princes. Taken from his parents in infancy, he's been bioengineered and indoctrinated to form part of the Empire's ruling class. His plan for his future once he is permitted, at sixteen, to leave his training 'temple' is basically = "Requisition Snazzy Ship + Roar About the Universe Having Fun + Be Hero + ?? = Become Emperor".

Naturally it does not work out like this.

The Empire is a horrible, horrible place, with a rigid class system which includes "mind-programmed" people used as various types of slaves. It has some non-human enemies, and there are a few minor human systems about the edges, but basically Imperials are put in whatever pigeon hole birth or the psychically linked "Imperial Mind" has designated for them, and that's their lot in life. Princes (who can be male or female - evidentally the human race hasn't managed to come up with a gender-neutral 'heir' rank) don't have a great deal more choice than anyone else.

The story is told memoir-fashion by a Khemri ten or so years down the track, looking back at his emergence from his training temple, early years finding out the job description of a Prince isn't necessarily "have fun, order people about". Princes are raised to be massively entitled, so the Khemri we first meet is a selfish piece of work, and we get to see how he grows and changes.

Despite a somewhat draggy start (there's not much _conversation_ in this book), the story takes on a compulsive "what-happens-next", "why is that so" aspect which makes it a quick, enjoyable read, although only Khemri himself is a _person_ in this story. We never really get to know anyone (even Raine) particularly well - but that's okay - the story is primarily about Khemri becoming a person. The Empire itself is completely over-the-top as only a truly enormous bureaucracy could succeed in being. (Ten thousand mind-programmed people used for a training simulation! For a handful of people!) A large portion of the princes are killed within an hour of leaving their training temples - a wasteful piece of idiocy which seemed nonsensical to me, until I realised this might be in itself a kind of 'winnowing' of unsuitable potential commanders, facilitated by the quality of assassin assigned to protect them.

(view spoiler)[I never quite fully warmed to Khemri. He starts out as the arrogant, unquestioning ass he's designed to be, matures out of that, but is never quite a real person until the "usual cure" (the old Love of a Good Woman fixes _everything_!) Since Raine is pretty much a Nice Girl cipher, it was hard to feel much about their romance, other than to hope that Raine wasn't hurt too badly by it.

The conclusion is on many levels a triumph of selfishness. Khemri has learned to despise the Empire, and yet finds himself in the position to rule it. The Empire is a massive and apparently stable monument to injustice (mind-programmed sex slaves!). Khemri thinks it would be a horrible fate to be in charge of the Empire, so he arranges for his rival Prince/sister – who has shown no particular sign of being any kind of moral person – to be Emperor instead, and gets himself sent back to his Nice Girl. The End. It's, uh, a happy ending, but it just didn't feel like a 'right' one, and left me feeling a bit let down. (hide spoiler)]


So, overall, interesting read, kept me entertained, probably wouldn't re-read.

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Reading Progress

04/21/2012 "Okay, so the main character has been raised an arrogant, entitled tit who is severely ignorant of what's really going on. Let's see how long it takes him to overcome that."

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Tatiana I see what you meant in your comment on the blog, Andrea. Another reason why I didn't think (view spoiler)[Khemri should have chosen to be an Emperor is that I don't think he, as just a part of the group consciousnesses, could have done enough to overthrow the whole Empire, and within his allotted 20 years. (hide spoiler)]


message 2: by Andrea (last edited May 16, 2012 03:24pm) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Andrea (view spoiler)[Did he need to overthrow the Empire? Could he not just have tried to destabilise it? Mitigate some of the sheer awfulness of an Empire where people are mind-controlled into beating each other to death for entertainment purposes - even when no-one is watching?

But it's not even choosing not to which I considered so bad. It's that he never even thought about it. He didn't have any struggle between "should I take this on and try and DO something" and "I miss my lady love". He simply hated the Empire, didn't like the sound of being part of the group mind, and that was it. No struggle, no hesitation, no moment of empathy for those millions of mind-controlled sex slaves.

People don't _have_ to be heroes. But, gosh...
(hide spoiler)]


It was pretty disappointing because I'd thoroughly enjoyed the book till then.


Tatiana I won't lie, I wouldn't have hesitated to reject that option either. But at the same time I agree in a sense that Khem's transformation and switching from one viewpoint to another was too quick and underdeveloped.


Andrea I guess most people would want to reject that option as well. But, while (view spoiler)[being the Emperor (hide spoiler)] seems a pretty awful fate, rejecting that option is a fairly short-sighted approach in relation to protecting the person Khemri presumably cares about. (view spoiler)[The Empire will still be huge and horrible and even if his sister holds true for twenty years, after that Raine's world will again be unprotected from it - and their kids will be facing the brunt of any renewed attention. Keeping in mind that barely anyone is being born with sufficient psi ability to BE Emperor, then the logical things for the next Emperor to do is go collect the kids of 'the one who got away'. Or perhaps next cycle will see no-one able to be Emperor (given the attrition rate of Princes that wouldn't be surprising) and that would mean an Empire disintegrating into factional wars, likely spilling into the border worlds, instead of any kind of controlled change to the system. (hide spoiler)]

So while I can understand Khemri's reluctance, I thought his decision both selfish and incredibly short-sighted.

It bugs me a great deal (as you can probably tell since I'm blathering on!) because all it would take would be a couple of extra sentences, a few tiny tweaks, to at least acknowledge the issue, even if he still made the same decision.

Ah well.


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