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Not in love with Kale Eddison by Joanne McClean
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Apr 21, 2012

did not like it
bookshelves: sorta-read-dnf-skipped-to-the-end
Read in April, 2012

Arrrrgh!
One of the most irritating things about this book, the other being the numerous spelling/grammatical errors, is the tone of writing.

There's lack of emotion to make me engaged, and I feel like the author is observing Izzie through a looking glass and writing it down in bits: Izzie rolled her eyes. Izzie sighed. Izzie left her school stuff upstairs.....
Sentences feel really awkward, dull and impersonal, and it broke my mood to keep reading.
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