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Fifty Shades of Grey by E.L. James
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Dec 20, 2013

liked it

The overall premise and plot line are good, however, the writing and character development are not. I am on the fence as to whether I will read the subsequent novels. I am very thoroughly sick of writers using first person present tense. Honestly, that is the way first graders write and unless you are going to do something really interesting with it, go to third person. Interior dialogue is over-rated and a bit of a cop out. Curiosity may kill this cat though, so I may end up reading the others.

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