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Inside Out by Evan Francisco
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Read on April 18, 2012, read count: Once

** spoiler alert ** Really really like this story but the grammar kept messing me up because the tenses would get mixed up. It was hard reading a sentence that was in 1st person present tense and then another sentence that was in 1st person past tense or even present or past tense in the same sentence. Tried to fix it in my head but I ended up confusing myself. But beside that I REALLY like this story! It has so much potential and I wouldn't mind buying it if the grammar is fixed. I'm really looking forward to the second book. I also like that Jordan in the jealous and overprotective type. And Callan being mated to a vampire...that is just HOT and so cute. The ending to this story had my mind going on a rampage trying to imagine what might have happened or what DID happen in Jordan's bed. So many naughty thoughts that can't be confirmed, sadly. Also I really liked the little brotherly bonding moment that Jordan and Stanley had in the last chapter. Oh! The beginning of this story had my going CRAZY! I felt like smacking Jordan and telling him that he should just accept Jace at his mate. Couldn't he see how much Jace was suffering :( But they finally got together and I got the opportunity to read all of their lovey-dovey moments, which totally made up for the heartbreaking chapters in the beginning :D
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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey, Rosa! Thanks for reviewing this story!

I'm actually working on editing this book. Since I'm fifteen and busy with school, it may takes a lot of time.

I'm also looking for someone who can teach me on how to improvise my grammar. I still need to learn a lot now.


Rosa I wish I could teach you and help you out but I'm not the best teacher when it comes to English :'( Sorry. But your age surprised me. So young yet your knowledge in English is GREAT! English is known to be the hardest language to learn and you are doing a excellent job :D


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks for the review.

Just to inform you that the second book is available for read.

I hope my English improves. I done a lot of things that I hope will improve the way I write.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Thanks
-Evan

p.s. Note that it's a work-in-progress. I will proofread it time by time.


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