This wasn't as good as I hoped. It's a quick scene on the last couple pages. Most of it is build up dialogue that the author calls foreplay. This wasn't a very good scene to consider foreplay. It wasn't good enough. This short story is an add in that did not take place in the books. I was hoping that we were going to get an inside view of the one sex scene Barrons and Mac had. That would have been awesome. I was dying to know his thoughts while he was doing Pria/Mac.
* I felt cheated that the author throws this scene in and tells us it took place, but Mac just doesn't remember it happening because Barrons charmed it away. What? Doesn't feel right. Feels like a cop out.