So far so good. I'm about a third of the way through the story and I'm enjoying it and witty humor of the characters. The only thing that irritates me is 'sir' and his authority over everyone he comes into contact with. I feel bad for Edith. As for Bastin I think he's a total mystical hottie (although his style may not exactly work on land)
So yeah, I plan to edit it when I'm finished.