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The Invitation by Diane Hoh

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Mar 21, 12

Read in March, 2012

Reviewed at http://www.mandikayereads.com/archive... (3/23/12)

Ever read a book blurb and think that sounds really interesting, only to read the book and be grossly underwhelmed?

That’s this book.

I was blissfully unaware that this is a re-release of a 1993 MG book – turning things into e-books is all the rage these days – but honestly, it needs to stay in 1993.

The idea is a fabulous one. But the execution? The execution of this book was painful to read. There was zero character development, the “twist” was truly silly, and the dialogue was shallow and banal.

The only reason I give it 2 stars instead of 1 is because it had so much potential. The plot was good. The writing was not.

Skip this one guys and gals.

Trust me.

And one final nitpick… I got an uncorrected proof via NetGalley. Yes, I understand it’s an uncorrected proof, but the sheer volume of typos was astounding. I couldn’t go a page without finding nearly undecipherable words (for some unknown reason, every time the word “friend” was supposed to be used, it said “Mend”. With a capital M). Not to mention the gigantic UNCORRECTED PROOF watermark splashed on every single page (Take note publishers: you don’t want to make reading the galley more difficult for us).

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Elizabeth B I wish I could just copy and paste your review because this was EXACTLY what I thought down to the typo issue and the non embedded "uncorrected proof" that interrupted the kindle text


Mandi Kaye Ottaway It's gotten to the point where I just decline to review the ones that have the watermark. It's too hard to try and read through it - especially when it's nearly as large as the page.


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