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Desperate Betrayal by Hildie McQueen
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Apr 05, 12

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If this book is ever edited properly (I got 10% into it and couldn't look past the numerous sentence fragments, poor wording choices, strange stilted dialogue and awful punctuation) I will give it another shot. For now, I'm putting it down. Really, it reads like a rough draft. I read those enough for work, don't care to do that when I'm reading for pleasure. If I had a red pen on my reader, it would have run dry with just the amount I read.

I know I said I'd read this for review, so I apologize, I just can't finish. Not rating.
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Reading Progress

04/04/2012
10.0% "Ugh, struggling with poor editing."

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