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The Invaders by John Flanagan

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May 31, 12

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Read from May 05 to 11, 2012 — I own a copy, read count: 1

The good news? This installment was every bit as good as "The Outcasts." There's a significant improvement in the Author's writing style since the last seven "Ranger's Apprentice" books. The storyline of "The Invaders" is exciting, fun, and perilous. Hal is easily just as likable as Will was, and Hal's crew continues to be an excellent supporting cast. Thorn isn't Halt, that's true enough, but I still like him a lot as the "old mentor" type. And I admit, I absolutely love John Flanagan's pirates. He patterned them after the Barbary Coast pirates, therefore making them historically accurate! Compared to Asia and the Barbary Coast, there really were not that many European pirates; they were not the "traditional" pirate in their days. So points to Flanagan for choosing a good model for his! Zavac, also, is a believable pirate captain without being cliche. He isn't the best villain out of the ones Flanagan has written - Lord Morgarath is still my favorite, - but he fits the series. I look forward to seeing how the Herons outsmart him.

However, even with all of the pros, there were quite a few cons as well. "The Invaders" did not need to be nearly as long as it was. The Author devotes a lot more time to further Brotherband training than is necessary. It's true that in these sections the Reader gets to see the Herons' camaraderie develop, but I think that the Author could have illustrated that perfectly fine in other ways. Battle strengthens bonds between a person in ways training can't. Nevertheless, there was something about these scenes that was enjoyable enough that it didn't make the story drag.

Another con was the appearance of Lydia, our "leading lady." Yes, we have another girl character. I'll make one thing clear: as a character, Lydia is fine. She's not annoying (yet), she can fight without seeming like a macho-woman, and she's practical and doesn't have an attitude. But, she also is not a necessary character. I have yet to see how she adds to the story. It feels like the Author might have just placed her in the story so we girl Readers would have a female character to liken to. I'm not so sure that that was a good idea, especially since there seems to be a potential love triangle surfacing between Lydia, Stig, and Hal. If Stig and Hal end up fighting with each because of Lydia, I will be intensely annoyed, because all three characters are good, and I don't want them getting childish.

My hopes for this series still continue, but I do have some misgivings that I hope will be demolished with Book Three.

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Reading Progress

05/06/2012 page 108
25.0%
05/07/2012 page 202
47.0% "So far, so good."
05/07/2012 page 202
47.0% "So far, so good."
05/09/2012 page 300
69.0% "As a character, Lydia seems fine. But so far, she doesn't seem like a necessary character, and if a love triangle springs up between her, Hal, and Stif, I'm going to be soooooooooooo mad." 1 comment
05/11/2012 page 432
100.0% "Almost as good as the first one."

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Hazel West So what thought ye?


Hazel West Yes, I know I'm speaking medieval, too much writing ;)


Mara That's all right - when I work too much on my story, I start sounding like Jane Austen. ;) But anyway, I liked it. I agree with you that Lydia seemed like an unnecessary character. I liked her, but I am failing to see her purpose. And if Flanagan goes any further with the love triangle between her, Hal, and Stig, I'm going to be annoyed. I like both Stig and Hal, but not if they start fighting over a girl. This book definitely did not need to be 400 pages. While the techincal details and further Brotherband didn't necessarily detract from the story, there didn't need to be so much of it. And I also agree that Zavac was a good pirate. Flanagan's pirates are pretty realistic. There's no loyalty among them; they're just a bunch of criminals. And I'm glad he chose to write pirates based off of the Barbary pirates, rather than European pirates, because the Barbary pirates 1)lasted way longer than the European ones, and 2)there were far more of them.


Hazel West I gave a huge groan when I saw that love triangle beginning. We don't need to do this to Hal and Stig, they are too close knit for something stupid like that to come between them. My summation of that was Thorn's parting words ;P I enjoy their brotherly relationship far too much to see them torn apart by an intruding female character.

I also agree that this book didn't need to be as long as it was. But then filler books are always kind of give or take. I have a feeling he'll be back strong with the next one, since that one will hopefully have a more action based plotline.

And I have always had a thing for the Barbary pirates, which is one of the reasons I loved Zavac so much.Far cry from Pirates of the Caribbean ;P


Mara Hopefully it'll be a love triangle that peters out like the one that was sort of there between Will, Horace, and Evanlyn. And I like Lydia, so I don't want a love triangle to turn her into an annoying girl.

Well, one thing that I think causes Flanagan's books to be longer than they need to be - with the exception of the first three - is that his writing style is very movie-ish. Which makes sense, because he wrote for a TV series, so I'll excuse him on those grounds. But movie-ish writers always seem to think that they need more technical detail that is really necessary. Oh well; every once in a while I kind of enjoy that.

*laughs* The difference between John Flanagan and the POTC team is that Flanagan actually did research. ;)


Hazel West I know I liked Lydia much better than I ever did Evanlyn. She at least seems to have some sort of head on her shoulders and she has a vendetta too, which Evanlyn didn't.

I never really thought of that before, but you're probably right. I never really felt any of his books lagging, it's just that he seems to add stuff that you don't really need to know. I noticed it more in this book than some of his others though and I think it was mostly because of the lack of action.


Hazel West I agree with you whole-heartedly about that fact that battle strengthens brotherly bonds better than anything else. I think that was the only thing that kind of disappointed me about this book is because I had anticipated a lot more action than there was. I wasn't thinking it would be a "in-between" book but it was. I definitely liked Zavac though. And no, Thorne is not Halt, but I do like him a lot anyway. I think I was mostly disappointed with the appearance of Lydia because I was like, hey there hasn't been a girl character yet in this series! I'm loving all the time with the guys--and then she shows up :P But yes, I'm definitely awaiting the next one!


Mara Hopefully Lydia will prove a good enough character to make up for her unnecessary role. ;)


Hazel West I think she has potential, espicially since she's not already mooning over the boys :P She's a girl on a mission!


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