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Play Fling by Amber Scott
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Jul 15, 12

bookshelves: kindle, series, romance, chick-lit, 2012-reading-challenge
Read in July, 2012

The story was a good idea, just don't think it was executed properly. I got the Kindle edition, and the little story "Just Desserts" was included in the end. This would have made a great prologue to set up Millie’s character.

The editing was a little off. I don't expect perfect editing, but during a chapter, there was no indication of when the voice was changing. One paragraph it was Millie, the next someone else.

I liked the second in this series better (accidently read it first) because there wasn't as much of Millie's character in it.
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