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Narrative Loserdom by Ryan Collins
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Apr 19, 12

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Read from March 12 to April 18, 2012

With its protagonist struggling to reach maturity and failing miserably through a series of misadventures, Narrative Loserdom has echoes of great novels like J. D. Salinger's Catcher in the Rye or The Heart is a Lonely Hunter by Carson McCullers. This is a format where the protagonist intentionally does not advance and instead remains stuck in a case of arrested development that echoes the problems of the society that surrounds them.

The Good: The journal entry format aids in creating a well-characterized protagonist that is interesting and engaging. Justin Taggart is the best aspect of Narrative Loserdom.

A lot of the misadventures are humerus. Ryan Collins has a good, mild wit that is refreshing.

The Bad: Narrative Loserdom relies on the strength of the protagonist to tie its elements together. While Justin Taggart is a strong character with a lot of detail and lots of interesting internal motivations, he isn't strong enough to tie the narrative together. Instead we get lot of little incidents that don't go anywhere.

Justin Taggart's failure to start a relationship with Sterling is one of the strongest themes in the book, but she hardly ever figures into any of the misadventures, so Taggart's pinings for her ring hollow. Even if Taggart is never meant to get the girl, it would be nice to know more about his motivations for wanting her. Symbolically this may represent his failure to reach maturity, but I'd love to see it fleshed out.

A lot of the pop culture references went right over my head, but that may just be me.

The Bottom Line: This debut novel from Ryan Collins marks him as an author to watch. Despite its flaws, its intelligent design and wit show an author with a lot of potential.

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