Scott's Reviews > New Moon
New Moon (Twilight, #2)
by Stephenie Meyer
by Stephenie Meyer
Scott's review
Aug 04, 08
Recommended for:
anybody except feminists, girls, and the emotionally secure
Read in August, 2008
** spoiler alert **
I can't even.... wow. Is anyone else completely aghast that this dreck saw a printing press not to mention became a wildly popular series?
I thought I was being hard on Twilight when I criticized it for portraying a relationship so ill-advised and unhealthy and then romanticizing that relationship to young people as if people didn't already make enough bad decisions. I thought maybe now that Book 1 was done the series would take a nice turn.
Enter: New Moon. Exit: Shred of decency.
Were it simply a problem of the weakly-developed characters, confused and uneven plotline, hundreds of pages of cloying depression (only to be replaced by cloying sentimentality later on), and an appalling and unsubtle parallel to Romeo and Juliet, this novel would simply be mediocre teen fare.
But then we must consider the problem of Bella: whiny, needy, and sullen, blindly devoting herself to a partner that constantly patronizes, criticizes, and subjugates her only for him to leave so she can spend the next 8 months in a state of emotional vacancy so acute that she forgets everything else in her life that a girl can be happy about. Bella is only complete--and she says this herself--when her man is by her side. And apparently, according to Meyer at least, this is ok. It's ok to create a character so bereft of purpose, self-assurance, and identity that she can't live without a relationship based on nothing substantial, just beauty, lust, and exoticism.
And it's ok for her to experience no emotional maturity whatsoever because in the end, her lover comes back spewing the same gushy nonsense as before while still lording it over her and flying into rages when he doesn't get his way.
The only compelling character in this story was Jacob. That is... until he became a werewolf and became as cardboard and unappealing as the rest of the cast. The irrational hatred between vampires and werewolves gets played off as instinctual, but it has all the logic of bigotry, and that these characters do nothing to try overcoming it is yet another way in which they are immature and non-self-examining.
Due to the audience for which this intended, I have to say that New Moon and the Twilight Saga as a whole are not just poor, they're damaging.
And don't even get me started on the "epiphany" of p. 527. We were expected to believe Bella thought Edward had ceased to love her even though an autistic housefly could see it was nowhere near true?
This book failed. Intensely. I'm sorry.
I thought I was being hard on Twilight when I criticized it for portraying a relationship so ill-advised and unhealthy and then romanticizing that relationship to young people as if people didn't already make enough bad decisions. I thought maybe now that Book 1 was done the series would take a nice turn.
Enter: New Moon. Exit: Shred of decency.
Were it simply a problem of the weakly-developed characters, confused and uneven plotline, hundreds of pages of cloying depression (only to be replaced by cloying sentimentality later on), and an appalling and unsubtle parallel to Romeo and Juliet, this novel would simply be mediocre teen fare.
But then we must consider the problem of Bella: whiny, needy, and sullen, blindly devoting herself to a partner that constantly patronizes, criticizes, and subjugates her only for him to leave so she can spend the next 8 months in a state of emotional vacancy so acute that she forgets everything else in her life that a girl can be happy about. Bella is only complete--and she says this herself--when her man is by her side. And apparently, according to Meyer at least, this is ok. It's ok to create a character so bereft of purpose, self-assurance, and identity that she can't live without a relationship based on nothing substantial, just beauty, lust, and exoticism.
And it's ok for her to experience no emotional maturity whatsoever because in the end, her lover comes back spewing the same gushy nonsense as before while still lording it over her and flying into rages when he doesn't get his way.
The only compelling character in this story was Jacob. That is... until he became a werewolf and became as cardboard and unappealing as the rest of the cast. The irrational hatred between vampires and werewolves gets played off as instinctual, but it has all the logic of bigotry, and that these characters do nothing to try overcoming it is yet another way in which they are immature and non-self-examining.
Due to the audience for which this intended, I have to say that New Moon and the Twilight Saga as a whole are not just poor, they're damaging.
And don't even get me started on the "epiphany" of p. 527. We were expected to believe Bella thought Edward had ceased to love her even though an autistic housefly could see it was nowhere near true?
This book failed. Intensely. I'm sorry.
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Aug 06, 2008 08:30pm
What a great review. I completely agree with you.
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Wow, thanks! :-) Yeah... when I first saw the e-mail that you left a comment, I thought to myself "Oh crap, here it comes. The backlash." I'm glad that wasn't the case and we're of similar mind.TWINSIES!
LOL! Your review says everything I thought while reading this book. I really don't understand why so many people love Twilight. I think it's a (bad) sign of the times. :[
I can't understand the appeal to the series. I've read the first 2 books, and Bella is not someone I would want to emulate. She's the anti-heroine. It's as if she's asking to be put out of her misery.
You put into words, my very sentiments. I am appalled at the way teens are flocking to read on.... and their parents are ever so happy to let them. No decency! How incredibly backwards even. Here is a young lady ready to sell her soul because of someone's blue eyes, because without his great looks, she can not exist. Incredible that it is a top seller!
Ha, I'm amused by these comments and your review, because I totally agree and can't help liking them anyway! Well, not liking as much as gleefully reading on while wanting to strangle the author. ;-)
Excellent review. I had a review of Twilight up, but I've somehow lost it (?) but basically it said I was stunned by this book. Stunned that we are marketing this book as a portrait of an ideal relationship (true love!)to teenage girls.Your sentiment that these books are actually damaging is exactly how I feel, exactly. My boyfriend's teenage niece is addicted to them and I told him I was completely appalled and did!not!approve!
I just posted my review of the first 3/4 of New Moon...my review is not as well written as yours, but check it out if you'd like - it's so nice to find someone else who feels as strongly against these books as I do!
I cannot agree more. This book pissed me off more than I can express. Bella is so limp, so spineless...Just disgusting.
Thank God there are other women out there who think this way. It is bad enough that my teenage students think that Bella's attitude is perfectly acceptable. But when my well educated 30+ friends also agreed I though I'd gone to Hell. Thanks for sharing your disgust with this book!
I like the insight of your point that the werewolves and vampires never examine themselves and their hatred is bigoted and weak. Bella's logic to become a vampire is flimsy and her response to loosing Edward is anti-heroine. The series improves in slight ways, but the poor quality for the story, characterization, motivations, and purple prose remain. Thanks for the review.
Well, I can't disagree with you more. I think the series is exceptional, but maybe as a strong woman who remembers how awkward she felt when she was in high school and part of college I can understand some of the character of Bella. I think Stephanie Meyer captures the awkward teenager quite well and with humor. Hardly insulting to women. Merely insulting to the women looking for insults to women...
Wow, well said! Your review was much better then the book.. I actually felt dumber after reading New Moon..




