I liked the story a lot. It was exciting. I would liked for the chapters to be a little longer to have more on each part so when you changed over to the other scenes it would not feel as though you were being pulled and pushed through the hurricane. Although that was the feel of the reading as though you were in the hurricane when you weren't. Overall a great read. Would recommend it to others. Loved meeting you at the writers meeting. May pick your brain one day.