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Malaika by Van Heerling
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Feb 15, 2012

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Read from February 15 to 17, 2012

This is another that could really have used a good edit, but certainly one of the better pieces I've read for the Kindle.

(The word is disdain, not distain. Please fix that.)

I think the very end was heavy handed and could have used some of the brutal honesty found in the rest of the work. Not all stories have to have a happy ending; not all people get forgiven, even if they deserve it.

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02/16/2012
57.0% "A high step above all but the classic free books I've downloaded."

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