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The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle
by Avi
by Avi
Middle school girls who know nothing whatsoever of history will undoubtedly find this book utterly enthralling. I won't deny that the story is paced well and the prose is well constructed. The problem is, it has no internal integrity. Books with talking animals and intergalactic travel require less suspension of disbelief. Charlotte makes a completely implausible personality shift. An etiquette-obsessed, "well-bred," snobbish, wealthy Victorian girl, in a fit of remorse, suddenly rejects her social status and joins a ship's crew. We are supposed to swallow this, despite the fact that, at the beginning of the book, she completely believes in the values of her society (that she is superior to the crew, that any type of physical labor is beneath her, etc.). That kind of value shift would take several months, maybe years, not the short time alloted in the book. To think otherwise is to overlook the personality of the character in question and the deeply ingrained nature of social mores. Add to this the fact that Avi makes feeble attempts at duplicating the language of the time period, and I just couldn't handle the book. On the strength of Avi's ability as a writer, I gave it two stars instead of one. However, this book's complete failure to tell a story that is in keeping with the heroine's personality makes it, in my opinion, an unworthwhile read.
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12 de May 14:10
this book at first i thought was pretty boring but after getting in to the story i was commited to finish it as if it wer a book report the book suddenly took a hop from boring to amazing i could not put it down its a bout a young girl named chorrlteet who suddlenly finds herself on a ship sailing from england to america as the only person better yet female abored not nowing surronding her are pirates good and bad read the rest of the book to see what happens trust me you will defently enjoy it!!!!!!! im telling you
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I totally disagree with your assessment of Charlotte's value shift being "implausable". At Charlotte's age she is completely impressionable and would be questioning everything she has been told even without such a completely life-altering experience that she goes through. I taught junior high for 17 years, so I know and have seen this first-hand. My students loved this book.
I respect your review and now that I'm I my twenties, I agree. However, when I first discovered this book I loved it. My copy is worn and aged. I think, perhaps, for the sake of adventure, we should put aside logic and live through Charlotte. It's a fiction book and I never considered it otherwise, even as a child. Let's not nit-pick. :)
^i agree with Jocelyn and Dawna. i thought it was amazing, but now i can understand what you mean. it's not easy going from riches to rags. if this were in real life we would be on "the rich side"- in our comfy houses. being put into a situation where we wouldn't be able to access our "creature comforts", how well would we do on the poor side? kinda bad at first. but i think we'd get over it after a bit of time.
C'mon now, apply this sort of logic and nearly every kids' adventure story goes to pieces! Next you'll be telling us that real-life kids aren't brave enough, smart enough and determined enough to do the sorts of things heroes and heroines do all the time in children's books!
I understand what you meant. But this is a children's book, children don't really care much about time pacing logics, as long as it's a good story with a good moral, it's a good book. sometimes we adults should relax and read these books in a our child's point of view to really appreciate their stories.
haha. i remembered i loved reading this book in middle school. You can imagine how funny i found it when the first review i read said that middle school aged girls who knew nothing of history would love this book. I did! good call :)
I loved this book when I was a kid, and I still enjoy it, but I agree that the premise is rather unlikely (very unlikely, actually). However, I disagree with your statement about Avi's poor attempts to reconstruct the era's dialogue. For the age this book is intended, he did a good job.


