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Unchained by L.B. Tillit
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Feb 05, 12


The story was interesting and I did enjoy it, however both the characters and the story were told on a superficial level, never bringing the reader inside. Almost half the book felt like a ‘tell’, giving the reader the impression that the main character was just rattling off what was going on around him. Near the end we were brought a little more inside and the flow of the story improved.

A more careful editing of the book is encouraged.

In reading up on the publisher, Saddleback Publishing, I learned that it has a division for struggling readers. Taking this into consideration can explains why the text does not go into details about what’s going on.

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