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Outpost by Ann Aguirre

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Oct 05, 12

bookshelves: 1st-person, zombies, read-in-2012, reviewed, romance, sci-fi, ya, love-triangles, library-owned, dystopia, apocalypse
Read from September 27 to October 03, 2012

As seen on Zombie Mommies.

I'm almost tempted to take my Enclave review from over a year ago, change a few points and call it done. I'm overdue in library fines...and it's basically identical to how I feel about Outpost (just add the romance part.)

What this means is that what I thought about Aguirre's writing in Enclave is pretty much the same here...and I'm not yet sure if that's a good thing or not.

On the one hand, I very much enjoyed the background and thought process that went into the world of Outpost. Deuce has found herself in Salvation (a town based on fundamentalist/religious doctrine) and must figure out her role in it. The world building in Outpost is one of Aguirre's strengths in this series. She really tries to have you imagine what the world might look like if it went apocalyptic: there was the gang and underground life of Gotham, evidenced in Enclave and now in Outpost, another scene of life in a separate and guarded town much further away. Could this happen in reality? I think so. So in that regard, what Deuce tries to make sense of is real: how she was raised in her former life and what she is being taught now.

On the other hand, this would have made a much greater impression on me if there was more of a character focus. While the plot flowed smoothly (albeit slooowwwlly...), I didn't feel as connected to Deuce as I would have liked. And it really bothered me that I didn't; she's a strong fighter, loyal, and has a no-nonsense kind of attitude so why didn't I...like her? And then it hit me...she's a little too perfect. I'm not saying that she didn't make some really big mistakes in the story because she did, it's just that...as a character, she feels too flat, too good, too one-dimensional, too heroic. Sometimes I felt like Deuce's thought process was too mature:

"Whether there was any truth to it or not, I accepted that flaw in human nature. Topside or down below, they always needed someone to blame..."

or

"...it broke my heart into a thousand pieces. But it wasn't time to be angry; I couldn't focus on how his behavior made me feel. I had to recall that self-doubt sliced at him like hidden knives."

I'm not saying it isn't a good idea to go through this type of thought process because it is, but sometimes it felt like I was listening to a therapist talk--not a 16 year old girl. Granted I haven't lived Deuce's life but all this self-regulating-I-know-everything behavior just doesn't fit right.

Because the focus of the story presents society in an emerging new world, I understand why Aguirre's writing is so plot-driven. I do think there could have been more "show-not-tell" scenes that might have picked up the pacing of the story. Outpost seemed to go on and on without much happening (at least to me) until close to the end. (Then my heart started pounding. Finally!) I guess for an apocalyptic world, I tend to expect more edge-of-my-seat reading.

However, I do find the concept of the story fascinating and can make for some enlightening discussion material. And it's really because of that, that I give this 3.5/4 stars. I do think Aguirre has very nice descriptive writing. But what I am most happy about was the romance between Deuce and Fade! Sheesh, I'm such a sucker for romance. I do look forward to Horde(Book #3) but I might not be as fanatical about it as some other reads.

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Pricky I'm a little disappointed in the cover (what's up with that.) and not so sure about the book description but I'll give it a go.


message 2: by E (new) - rated it 4 stars

E :) and agreed these covers are minimalistic without needing to be...


Surin I'm reading this right now but having a hard time with it cause it's very different from Enclave. Like really different. =X


Pricky E wrote: ":) and agreed these covers are minimalistic without needing to be..."

Honestly, I can't even remember why I was disappointed...Funny how my thought process can change in just a matter of months.

SL wrote: "I'm reading this right now but having a hard time with it cause it's very different from Enclave. Like really different. =X"

I've only gotten a little bit in and it does seem to have a different feel to it. What do you think has been the biggest difference to you so far? Plus, I've forgotten almost everything that happened in Enclave so I'm having a hard time "catching up."


Surin Pricky wrote: "E wrote: ":) and agreed these covers are minimalistic without needing to be..."

Honestly, I can't even remember why I was disappointed...Funny how my thought process can change in just a matter of..."

The biggest difference of the story is the tone and setting. I understand that things are a bit different and there's some semblance of 'normalcy' since they got rescued into salvation and aren't fighting for their lives but what I liked about Enclave was the nitty gritty rules about a post apocalyptic society and of course the survival action. Salvation just seems kinda normal and so far 1/2 through the book nothing much has happens...

Which comes to my next point, because this book isn't about survival, the book is also more character focused and I don't think this writer's style matches this. The interactions between Deuce, Fade, Stalker and Tegan are just kinda odd, shallow and almost juvenile. Maybe it's cause I've been reading Marchetta back to back who is the queen of character development and interactions (gosh she doesn't even need a plot to make the book good, take The Piper's son for example).

I wasn't so into Enclave but liked it for it's action and since Outpost has none of these things (I'm halfway through the book), I'm having a hard time trying to even finish it =/


Pricky SL wrote: "Pricky wrote: "E wrote: ":) and agreed these covers are minimalistic without needing to be..."

Honestly, I can't even remember why I was disappointed...Funny how my thought process can change in j..."


SL, I think you hit upon some really key points especially the writer style. I think Aguirre's style really focuses more on the plot elements vs the character elements. I felt like Deuce was kind of a flat character. I mean, she seems so...perfect? I'm not sure that's the right word to describe her. She's got some really great qualities but there is a part of me that couldn't connect to her emotionally.

And like you said, since it was mostly centered on Salvation and "day to day" life, I wasn't as "on the seat of my pants" until about the last quarter of the book.

I still enjoyed it because of her descriptive writing and the idea behind the story but I do think there's something missing in this one that had made Enclave a page turner.


message 7: by E (new) - rated it 4 stars

E Love this! I see what you mean about Deuce, from a more adult-ish standpoint her thought process was pretty right on, but definitely advanced for a sixteen year old :)


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