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Mesmerized by Julia Crane
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Jan 18, 12

Read from January 17 to 18, 2012

** spoiler alert ** Could've been a really interesting storyline - definitely haven't read any books touching on this aspect of the paranormal realm, but the plot was way too rushed and there was no character development so it was hard to make any relationships believable. (Hey, I dream about you. Hey, I wanna jump your bones. I'm immortal. I'm a succubus. We need to run away. Oh, hey, use those powers you have never used before and cannot remotely be comfortable with and steal a car. Ok.) It was just bizarre. Like a check list the author was trying to run down.

Also, I never review a book based on editorial mistakes because I understand they can be missed, but there were tons here. Lots of repetitive words and fragmented sentences.
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Revati Ragini I wish I'd read this before buying - you're completely spot on with every aspect. I thought it could have been really good, it was a fresh idea. And this is a perfect example of grammatical mistakes ruining a story.

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