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Demon Vampire by Virgil Allen Moore
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did not like it
bookshelves: own, did-not-finish, reviewed, 1993-2003, arc-physical
Recommended to Amara by: Virgil Allen Moore

A copy of this book was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.

In short, the lack of adequate editing in this book prevented me from enjoying it. For my full review, see here.
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Virgil Moore Thank you for your honest and frank view of my slanted expression of art. I will try to achieve a higher grasp of English as I make my way through the career I have ahead of me.


Amara I do sincerely regret that I couldn't offer a more positive review. But I certainly do hope to see you develop and improve your craft as your career progresses, as I hate to see creativity like yours stifled by grammatical flaws and such. I look forward to the day when I stumble across a book of yours that I can wholeheartedly enjoy.


Virgil Moore You might want to take a look at my novella, SSR 1192. It's a 37,000+ word short story that is set in the same world as the first. Though I am sure you will find the grammar to be perfectly leveled to Demon Vampire, I believe you would enjoy the flow over everything else. Special Science Report 1192 is up on my site if you'd like to take a look at it.

Virgil Allen Moore
http://demonvampire.com/


Amara Thanks for letting me know about it. I'll certainly check it out when I get a chance.


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