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First Day Of Forever by Mary Calmes
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Jan 03, 2012

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bookshelves: short-story, mm
Read in January, 2012

I thought this was a bit fast and unbelievable. From the beginning I could see the feelings of Davis towards Cam and knowing how much Cam loved him back in the day, I could see how these two should end up together. I did feel, though, that the actual progression was too forced. All of a sudden Davis is interested but it was never really explained why outside of seeing Cam flirt with another guy. It didn't seem natural. Also, for me, the ending was closed (you know how it ends) but I would have loved the story to be a little bit longer with some beef about HOW it really worked.
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