Well, I don't know what I expected, but it wasn't this. Short, choppy, journal type story. It is as if you are reading someone's daily journal, or a journal written in whenever the author gets around to it.
This isn't anything that I've come to expect from Jayne Ann Krentz, but discarding that, it wasn't bad.
It is very short, but tells a complete story with minimum effort. It is a good tie in to the book featuring Fallon. I would have to say that it is too short, but any longer in this style of writting and it's too long.
I could take it or leave it...I don't have a strong feeling either way, so I'm going 'middle of the road' on rating.
(Found out after reading and reviewing it, that it is in the style of 'Tweeting'. Explains why it is written in the choppy format.)