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Fifty Shades of Grey by E.L. James
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Jun 26, 12

bookshelves: diary-style, sex, romance, ya
Read in June, 2012

This book needs an editor who abhors words like subconscious and inner goddess as much as i do. Honestly, i saw Ana as that cartoon type who has angel on one shoulder and the devil on the other. And those two at constant war with each other, shaking fists and making faces. You just cant keep a straight face when you read that an inner goddess gives the finger to someone. Ive heard of schizophrenia, but when you hear THREE voices in your head, it would be a probably good idea to bring it on, stronger medicine wise. And it cannot be subconscious if you're thinking about it.
Now if someone would delete those ridiculously weird inner monologues, this book could be good. I didn't even mind the stalkerish and possessive main hero here, because honestly, i think this just shows how much women miss men who know what they are doing. Manners and manliness. Now those are some tasty M&M's.
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