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The Duke's Perfect Wife by Jennifer Ashley

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Apr 08, 12

bookshelves: fiction, girly-books, highlanders, historical
Read from April 03 to 07, 2012

I liked it well enough, but... I don't know. I wanted more.

I was thrilled at the insight into Hart's character. He's the guy I suspected he was (if only his family knew!), but the depth of his emotions, and the decisions he's had to make, were great.

And Eleanor was great. I liked her, and she was a good foil to Hart most of the time (though at other times, she's was oddly easy to play).

But I wanted more.

I felt like there were a lot of things that didn't resonate for me in this book. An example is Hart's first (now deceased) wife Sarah. Apparently, he did very much love her. How, then, does Eleanor fit his life as the woman he's always pined after? Had things with Sarah not gone the way they did, what would have happened? He moved on after Eleanor, had a baby, was potentially happy... How does this jive with Eleanor being the great love of his life? I think the author could have made it work, had she addressed it, but the first marriage was never discussed in any detail, and so to me, it just felt like a gaping hole.

Also, I never really understood their fight. I mean, I sort of got it. (view spoiler)[Eleanor didn't have a problem with the mistress, she had a problem with Hart being exposed as a total control freak. I get that being upsetting, but ... I don't know that it is THAT upsetting. (hide spoiler)] Her reaction was 135 on a scale of 1 to 10. I was left going "seriously? that's it?" Even worse, after all that... (view spoiler)[years and years go by, and she goes back to him, despite the fact that he hasn't changed one bit. She knows he's playing her to get her back. She knows from very early on that he declared he was looking for a wife and the whole family knew he meant for her to be that wife. And she goes along with it anyway! What the hell was the big fight about, then? It just feels like 15 pointlessly wasted years - she was willing to marry the arrogant, controlling man in any case, so why did she break off the engagement the first time around? I was baffled. (hide spoiler)]

I don't know. It was fine, but I wanted more. The whole thing was mildly baffling and... it had a feeling of inevitability that really undermined any tension. I know that's weird to say, because in HR, the hero and heroine ALWAYS get together. But in the good ones, I get stressed about will they/won't they... because sometimes the conflicts seem so tense and huge. This one just plodded along in a pretty straightforward fashion, leaving me wondering why they didn't just get married the first go-round.

*shrug*

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04/07/2012 page 252
85.0% "I like it, but... its not the story I wanted. Its weird." 3 comments

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Catherine I'm curious to hear your thoughts on this.


Katyana I have really enjoyed the series up to this point, and I have really been looking forward to Hart's story (though I'm not generally a fan of second-chance romance), so I'm hopeful.


Catherine Keep us posted. :)


Katyana Hehe, I will. I am just hoping that my enjoyment of it isn't messed up by the current insanity of my life. I can't help wondering if that's why I cant get into the new Dead book, which I just tabled. I'm really only able to read in stolen 10-15 min snatches of time. So busy!


Catherine That sucks. I hate when that happens. :(


Katyana Yeah. I haven't even started this...


Catherine I agree with you. There was something missing in this story. Intensity for one. ;)

Eleanor was a great character and felt like she fit well with Hart, but you're right that her personality seemed to bounce back and forth. One minute she was clever and the next she was impossibly easy for Hart to play. It felt weird.

I completely forgot to gripe about the lack of backstory with Hart's deceased family in my review. I can't believe I forgot to mention it! It was a huge complaint of mine. My lack of understanding about the particulars of his relationship and feelings toward his dead wife was irritating. It made any mention of her or his dead son feel less compelling than I'm sure it was meant to be. But how can I care when I'm still not even certain how he transitioned from Eleanor to her and why they married. It was poorly played, in my opinion.

And yes, yes, YES about your spoiler section. I thought the reason for their separation was lame and the fact that they got back together so easily made it feel even more insincere.

You're completely right that the romance had a bit of a plodding feel. That was what I kept struggling to express whenever I talked about my vague dissatisfaction with the book. I finally just had to settle on saying that it lacked intensity. I did like the book, but it's all tangled up with my feelings of being shortchanged on his romance. :(


Katyana I think that the plodding inevitability of it REALLY didn't work with this being a second-chance romance. I mean, you know that second-chance romances aren't really my thing anyway, but I think that at their very foundation, they can't work if you don't have some tension of "how will the h/h work this out?!" Most of the time, my problem with second-chancers is that I don't buy that the relationship would ever work, given all the massive problems that caused it to fall apart in the first place. So it doesn't feel like "happily ever after"... it feels like "happy... for now."

This one was completely different. I don't buy that it ever would have fallen apart in the first place. Which was an off-putting vibe overall, and was disappointing to me because Hart really deserved better. He is a great, complicated character with layers and layers of depth, and he got a superficial, sparkly story.

The more distance I get from the book, honestly, the less I like it. I think I gave it the 4 stars on the strength of Hart and Eleanor's characters, because I really liked them. The story itself, though, probably gets a 2.


message 9: by Catherine (last edited Apr 10, 2012 08:55pm) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Catherine You've hit the nail on the head. Everything I saw of them had me baffled about why they broke up in the first place. Especially because nothing really changed. Why is it okay to marry now when he's still the same core person that he was when you broke up with him? It was weird. :(

I, as you know, do like the idea of second-chance romances, but I have a hard time finding ones that I like because of the exact reason that you mentioned. I want to love them, but most of the time I can't. Some things you just can't come back from. At least in my eyes you can't.


Katyana Yeah, I feel the same - there are some things that are just plain dealbreakers for me. And it seems like 98% of the time, The Event is something that I consider a dealbreaker.

Then you have this one, where The Event was baffling. *laugh*


message 12: by Dija (last edited May 07, 2012 01:36pm) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Dija Great review, Katyana! I agree with you on Hart's first marriage and the reason why Eleanor and Hart broke up. Neither was discussed satisfactorily, and I expected more from them. It was still a fun read though. :D


Katyana Yeah, it was, I was just disappointed. I was so looking forward to Hart's story. :(


message 14: by Dija (new) - rated it 4 stars

Dija Strangely, I'm not looking forward to Elliot's story at all. :/


Katyana Me either. We don't know him, so I feel unconnected.

Looking forward to Daniel, though. :)


message 16: by Dija (new) - rated it 4 stars

Dija Exactly. Plus I didn't really like Ainsley, so that has something to do with it as well.

I can't wait for his! I'm sure we'll get to see lots of Ian, Hart, Cam, and Mac in his book. :D


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