Lisa O.'s Reviews > Seraphina
Seraphina (Seraphina, #1)
by Rachel Hartman (Goodreads Author)
by Rachel Hartman (Goodreads Author)
Lisa O.'s review
bookshelves: arc, ebook, fantasy, ya-lit
Nov 17, 11
bookshelves: arc, ebook, fantasy, ya-lit
Read from November 06 to 14, 2011
I hate it when I have the impression that I am reading a different book from other readers whose opinion I value. Hate it. But it happens and unfortunately, it happened with this book. I've read some really glowing reviews but, alas, I can't just - partially - share the love.
Objectively, Seraphina meets all the requirements to become the next epic fantasy series: it has an original take on a fairly exploited theme - dragons -, an amazing world-building, a well formed, strong main character, a 5-star-worthy writing style.
But let's go in order:
The story is set in a world where two species exist: dragons and humans.
Dragons, powerful creatures, mathematical minds, able to take human form (saarantrai) to interact with people, reject all emotions as weakness, to the point of excising them from their brains.
Humans, constrained in their fragile bodies, fear dragons above all else and despise them, even in their human form, to the point of racial discrimination. These two species have been at war with one another for the longest of times, except for the past forty years when a rather unstable truce gave apparent peace to the world. Now it's the time to renew the peace.
So, dragons. And humans.
And then, there's Seraphina. She is the unthinkable, a half-dragon. It is imperative her identity remain a secret, but when the Prince of Goredd is found brutally murdered and all fingers point to the dragons, Seraphina becomes the unwilling protagonist of an investigation to unveil a plot that is threatening to jeopardize an already unstable peace and which will oblige her to face her most dreaded nightmare: the truth about herself.
Sounds awesome, doesn't it?
Dragons that can take human form, that speak their own language (Mootya), that are organized and regulated by an Ardmagar and a council of Censors. I found it fascinating. In fact, the world-building is extremely well developed and detailed. To be honest, I haven't read that many books about dragons, and I'd say this is probably on the same level as Eon: Dragoneye Reborn, as far a world-building goes.
Seraphina is an amazing character. Caught in the middle between two worlds, neither here nor there, she has been taught to despise a part of herself, to keep it secreted. She lives a lie and will never be accepted by either worlds. She is an abomination.
I loved her passion for music, her witty personality, her intelligence and self-deprecating sense of humor. I loved how she grows during the story, how she comes to term with her feelings, how lies do not belong to her but have only been inculcated in her, how she is fundamentally honest. Even the love story, which could have been a potential love triangle, comes out as believable, growing and sweet. Lucian is a bit too much the perfect guy for me, too good through and through, but still very likable. I found much more interesting a whole set of bizarre side characters: Madame Okra, Abdo, Viridius, Orma, Basind. They had me laughing most of the time and were truly what MADE this book for me.
Hartman's writing is what I'd define sophisticated and recherché. I had to look up a fair amount of words, my favorite probably being houppelande. There are no doubts about the quality of her writing and truly, there isn't much more to say about it.
But I have to defend my 3 stars.
I'll sum it up in one word: pacing.
Despite the fantastic world-building, the amazing characters and the luscious writing, I had such a hard time getting through this book, I considered abandoning it on more than one occasion. The quantity of information to take in in the first, say, 150 pages of the book is massive and not always explained in a way to make it crystal clear. Some things are just thrown there and then explained 50 pages later. There's a whole universe of saints to digest that... really, were they necessary? And there is barely any action up until - I marked it - page 168.To be honest: too slow for me, sometimes it really could not keep my attention.
I had a hard time wrapping my head around Seraphina's "garden" and her grotesques, I felt the need for a bit more physical descriptions - of the Quigutl, for example - and a MAP. I really, really wanted to see a map. How is this world? Where is the Tanamoot? How many other kingdoms are there and where are they in respect to Goredd?
So three stars. I enjoyed it because I was stubborn and kept reading and was finally rewarded in the second part but I'm not sure everybody would get through those first 100 and odd pages. Or maybe it's just me, other readers seem to adore it.
I'm looking forward to seeing the cover for it and I will surely pick up the sequel to this adventure with dragons, hoping that, with the infodump out of the way, I will find it a bit more fast-paced.
Find this review and and more at The Nocturnal Library
Objectively, Seraphina meets all the requirements to become the next epic fantasy series: it has an original take on a fairly exploited theme - dragons -, an amazing world-building, a well formed, strong main character, a 5-star-worthy writing style.
But let's go in order:
The story is set in a world where two species exist: dragons and humans.
Dragons, powerful creatures, mathematical minds, able to take human form (saarantrai) to interact with people, reject all emotions as weakness, to the point of excising them from their brains.
Humans, constrained in their fragile bodies, fear dragons above all else and despise them, even in their human form, to the point of racial discrimination. These two species have been at war with one another for the longest of times, except for the past forty years when a rather unstable truce gave apparent peace to the world. Now it's the time to renew the peace.
So, dragons. And humans.
And then, there's Seraphina. She is the unthinkable, a half-dragon. It is imperative her identity remain a secret, but when the Prince of Goredd is found brutally murdered and all fingers point to the dragons, Seraphina becomes the unwilling protagonist of an investigation to unveil a plot that is threatening to jeopardize an already unstable peace and which will oblige her to face her most dreaded nightmare: the truth about herself.
Sounds awesome, doesn't it?
Dragons that can take human form, that speak their own language (Mootya), that are organized and regulated by an Ardmagar and a council of Censors. I found it fascinating. In fact, the world-building is extremely well developed and detailed. To be honest, I haven't read that many books about dragons, and I'd say this is probably on the same level as Eon: Dragoneye Reborn, as far a world-building goes.
Seraphina is an amazing character. Caught in the middle between two worlds, neither here nor there, she has been taught to despise a part of herself, to keep it secreted. She lives a lie and will never be accepted by either worlds. She is an abomination.
I loved her passion for music, her witty personality, her intelligence and self-deprecating sense of humor. I loved how she grows during the story, how she comes to term with her feelings, how lies do not belong to her but have only been inculcated in her, how she is fundamentally honest. Even the love story, which could have been a potential love triangle, comes out as believable, growing and sweet. Lucian is a bit too much the perfect guy for me, too good through and through, but still very likable. I found much more interesting a whole set of bizarre side characters: Madame Okra, Abdo, Viridius, Orma, Basind. They had me laughing most of the time and were truly what MADE this book for me.
Hartman's writing is what I'd define sophisticated and recherché. I had to look up a fair amount of words, my favorite probably being houppelande. There are no doubts about the quality of her writing and truly, there isn't much more to say about it.
But I have to defend my 3 stars.
I'll sum it up in one word: pacing.
Despite the fantastic world-building, the amazing characters and the luscious writing, I had such a hard time getting through this book, I considered abandoning it on more than one occasion. The quantity of information to take in in the first, say, 150 pages of the book is massive and not always explained in a way to make it crystal clear. Some things are just thrown there and then explained 50 pages later. There's a whole universe of saints to digest that... really, were they necessary? And there is barely any action up until - I marked it - page 168.To be honest: too slow for me, sometimes it really could not keep my attention.
I had a hard time wrapping my head around Seraphina's "garden" and her grotesques, I felt the need for a bit more physical descriptions - of the Quigutl, for example - and a MAP. I really, really wanted to see a map. How is this world? Where is the Tanamoot? How many other kingdoms are there and where are they in respect to Goredd?
So three stars. I enjoyed it because I was stubborn and kept reading and was finally rewarded in the second part but I'm not sure everybody would get through those first 100 and odd pages. Or maybe it's just me, other readers seem to adore it.
I'm looking forward to seeing the cover for it and I will surely pick up the sequel to this adventure with dragons, hoping that, with the infodump out of the way, I will find it a bit more fast-paced.
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Reading Progress
| 11/07/2011 | page 30 |
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6.0% | "geez, I'm looking up words every two lines. Illiterate me." 2 comments |
| 11/08/2011 | page 75 |
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16.0% | "I'm still trying to wrap my head around the world-building. Quite a lot of info..." 7 comments |
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Nov 16, 2011 01:55pm
That's a good point about a map. A map would be awesome.
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I had to look up recherché :) I struggle a bit with fantasy, especially if the world-building is a little unclear and the pacing is slow.. it does sound interesting though.
Well said, as always Lisa!
Stephanie wrote: "That's a good point about a map. A map would be awesome."Yes, fantasy=map. I always use them, too. Even if the characters don't travel.
Reynje wrote: "I had to look up recherché :) I struggle a bit with fantasy, especially if the world-building is a little unclear and the pacing is slow.. it does sound interesting though.
Well said, as al..."
That's my high school French showing there Reynje!
I'm still hoping for a map in the official publication. ;)Even though you had issues with the pacing, at least you still enjoyed it, Lisa. The world-building, writing, and characters really won me over to the point where the pacing didn't bother me since I was so engrossed in the world and wanted to learn more about it.
Anyway, before I ramble on and on, great review!
All fantasy books should have maps. This needs to be an iron-clad rule. And I bet this one will, given what I've seen between fantasy ARCs and final books in the past.Excellent review, by the way.
I love this review :) You captured your feelings and the book really well.Hop[efully it comes with a map. I also like these kinds of books to come with character lists (or whatever they are called). I felt lost a few times in MM's Froi, for example, so many characters from so many regions and I often felt confused about who was who (politically and in relation to other characters, etc).
I have this one, but am not itching to get to it yet (it still has a while until release date...)
Nomes, thank you. Good point about character lists. In this case I don't think it's fundamental but I agree with you about Froi. Finnikin was ok, but in Froi a chart of characters was needed, even just to recap who was where and when.
Lisa, I am here for some encouragement. I am on page 145 and it is very slow going for me. It does pick up, right?
I didn't want to stalk your reading progress but I was kind of expecting this comment from you :DWell, it does pick up in a while - for me it was around page 168, but don't expect a life-changing experience as far as pacing is concerned.
I thought you might say that. I'd advise you to try to that turning point, another 20 pages that is, and then decide.
Great review! I agree with it all so far. Unique, I think approach to dragons, enjoying the world building, but the pacing..... I am at 30% and hopeful from your review I am over the hump:)
This book is incredibly slow going. I've stopped and picked it up so many times and I'm still only up to page 40. There are so many strange terms and irrelevant boring flashbacks it's really like being tossed into the deep end. Right now Seraphina's character is so boring, dull and mind-numbing. When the other reviewers point out her smart qualities, and interesting personality, I don't see it. At all. I guess I have to persevere but it's taking so much effort!
Anne wrote: "This book is incredibly slow going. I've stopped and picked it up so many times and I'm still only up to page 40. There are so many strange terms and irrelevant boring flashbacks it's really like b..."Yes, there are a lot of raving reviews out there and they make me wonder what I am missing. I mean, it's a good book and all but the pacing really didn't do it for me. But I guess Rachel graciously accepted the criticism since she linked back to my review in the blog months ago...
Lisa O. wrote: "Anne wrote: "This book is incredibly slow going. I've stopped and picked it up so many times and I'm still only up to page 40. There are so many strange terms and irrelevant boring flashbacks it's ..."Oh wow. She actually linked back to your review? That's very interesting.
Anne wrote: "Lisa O. wrote: "Anne wrote: "This book is incredibly slow going. I've stopped and picked it up so many times and I'm still only up to page 40. There are so many strange terms and irrelevant boring ..."Yes, but the one I published at The Nocturnal Library, identical to this one.
Awesome review Lisa!I picked up this book 2 days ago and I struggled with it so much.. and after 2 days I was only at page 120. I finally gave it up.
Maybe I'll try to go back to it at some point, but I just felt so... alone. I felt like everyone left and right was RAVING about Seraphina, and believe me -- I wanted to love it so badly. But man, I just can't get through it.
And this tending to the garden stuff is totally weirding me out.
I agree about the pacing. Currently at page 230 and I'm about to give up...The beginning was also a bit confusing but some of it makes sense now...



