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Elemental by Alexandra May
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bookshelves: 4-star
Read from October 18 to 19, 2011

This was a great book but there were a few if-y's there that brought it down to 4 stars. And there was that cliffhanger at the end that was a cliffhanger but wasn't as much as it should've been. I didn't really get the ARGH feeling when there's a really good cliffhanger that makes me cry because the next one isn't out yet (I'm exaggerating....a bit). Because we knew more than Rose, it was kind of annoying to see that she couldn't pick anything up and to see her struggles as she tries to figure everything out. Because of this, the news at the end when she is told the truth just breezes past us because we already knew somewhat of the story but that was just the history behind it all that we didn't know. The prologue I thought should have not included Rose's perspective and just stayed on Deverill in the circle with the other guys. With the inclusion of Rose in the prologue it made me think that the prologue should have been cut short to only the talk with the men about their plans.

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Alexandra May Hello,

I'd just like to take this opportunity to say thank you for reading Elemental: The First. It takes a lot of time and effort to write a solid review so I honestly appreciate your comments and constructive criticism.

We self published authors may have beta readers and editors who worked hard to get us self published thus far but it’s always honest reviews like yours that count at the end of the day.

So, once again, thank you.

With kind regards
Alexandra May


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