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The Edge of Darkness by Lissa Bilyk

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Dec 04, 11

bookshelves: dystopian, sci-fi, ebook, 2-am-or-later, 2011-reads, i-didn-t-see-that-coming, i-really-enjoyed-it, smart-heroine, original-and-creative, indie
Recommended for: Lovers of Sci-Fi
Read from October 10 to 13, 2011, read count: 1


When I was a young girl in middle school I had a friend who loved to write. I'd always see her hunched over her many composition notebooks, fervently scribbling away. One day I asked her what she was writing and with a bemused look she simply replied, "Stories." This, of course, piqued my curiosity even more. Every day, I'd ask her a new question about her stories: "How do you come up with the ideas?" "What are they about?" "Are you going to get them published?" and finally, "Can I read them?" The last one surprised her and she promptly told me no. I was disappointed, but with any artist they have to be ready to share their work on their own time and I was patient. That day came sooner than I thought when she surprised me asking me to read one of her stories saying, "It's not finished and keep in mind it's a very rough draft, but I'd like to know what you think of it." I was so excited; I immediately opened the black and white composition and dived in. She had the neatest hand writing I'd ever seen; perfectly placed on the lines in red ink. I was so impressed. It was a wonderful story and to this day I still wonder if she ever did anything with her writing talent.

I told you the above story because I wanted you to know I'm no stranger to Indie writers. That was first experience and I believe you can find some pretty cool and amazing stories with them. The Edge of Darkness definitely falls in this category for me. It is a very original and creative story about a world were prejudices against race and sexual orientation have been set aside...except for cyborgs. That is where we meet Maxine Ryan. There are many things I really liked about this book:

The Plot

The Edge of Darkness has a very solid plot. Max, a cyborg, is on a transport ship on her way back to Old Earth. However, she soon uncovers a conspiracy and races against time to ensure she and her fellow cyborgs' survival. It's one of those books where you cannot predict the outcome. It is not character driven or driven by romance, even though there certainly is a bit of romance between Max and her husband, Ethan. I'm trying to keep this review as spoiler free as possible because the plot twists *make* this book.

The writing Style

The book begins with Max telling us of her experience becoming a cyborg. She also tells us she is a prisoner of war on an asteroid called The Rock. The beginning is reminiscent of The Diary of Anne Frank for me. That might sound strange, but here's why. Max does a lot of retelling of her life before she became a cyborg similar to the way Anne talked about her life before she and her family went into hiding. At first, I had to get used to the way she was retelling it, but it quickly didn't matter because I wanted to know more about Max and her life.

The characters

One of the best things about this book is the diversity it brings in the world. Various nationalities are mentioned. In fact, Max herself is of Filipino descent. That was pretty cool to me. I also really loved Max as a heroine because she is no Mary Sue. At first she is unsure of herself, but after a few life changing moments on The Eden, she settles into her own and kicks butt! She is a character that rises above, and believe me when I say she more than "handles her business." Ethan, her husband, was a loving support system for her, but she was never overly dependent on him. They simply complimented each other as couples often do. It would have been really cool to get to know Lima and Lance or any other cyborgs better.

***Please, Please, Please do not click the spoilers if you haven't read the book!! It will completely ruin the reading experience for you!***

I'm a sucker for descriptions and pretty prose in books, so one of my favorite parts of the book is when Max sees The Eden's garden for the first time. The descriptions of the vegetation Max saw were spot on and I could easily visualize it. I would have loved to have read more descriptions of The Eden and The Rock because there were times when I couldn't quite visualize the scenes.

The only real negative I noticed while reading was the pacing. A lot of time passes while Max is on the Eden (six years), but it didn't feel like six years to me as a reader. It felt more like the next day.

Other than that, the book did leave me with a few questions:

The Authorities: (view spoiler)[Why did they want to spare Max from execution if they were planning on killing the cyborgs with the black hole? Were they planning on taking her with them when they escaped? Where were the Authorities during the rise up? They seemed to be almost nonexistent at the end. (hide spoiler)]

The ending: (view spoiler)[The whole black hole/Max going back in time/all the cyborgs turning up completely human, went right over my head. How did Lima and the amalgamation know Max, or any cyborg for that matter, could actually go back in time? (hide spoiler)]

Despite those small issues, I could not put the book (or my kindle) down! I stayed up well past 2 am because I just had to find out what happened next.

But my ultimate favorite part was when Max is fighting with (view spoiler)[the Captain (hide spoiler)] (and when I say 'fighting' I mean she was kicking his ass, lol) and he has the nerve to say in the middle of the fight, "I'm bleeding. Can I call for assistance?" And obviously, Max yells, "No!" I swear, right there I died with laughter so hard I almost woke my husband up. LOL.

This was a really cool, imaginative sci-fi book and I look forward to future works from Lissa Bilyk!

Disclaimer: Though Lissa Bilyk is a GoodReads friend of mine, these a my honest opinions of her book. :)

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Reading Progress

10/11/2011
7.0% "How about that. A main character who is not white. Can I just say I love the diversity in this book?"
10/13/2011
65.0% "Noooo!!!!!" 5 comments
10/13/2011
72.0% "Omg, Max!!! You did what?!" 7 comments
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