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Earthquake Came to Harlem by Jackie Sheeler
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I’m conflicted with Sheeler. Some of her poems like “God Enters the World” and “Terminatrix” are tight, concrete, and visceral, and yet very craftily paint allusions and images that work 100% of the time. And then there are some poems like “The Wager” and the titular “Earthquake…” which abandon (or never quite found) that tightness and realness of imagery… and where frankly, I cannot for the life of me figure out what she is reaching for.

I hesitate to make this analogy because I am an amateur, unpublished poet, but this seeming disconnect reminds me a lot of my poetic work; sometimes, I craft (what I consider to be) a beautifully imaged poem, but no one seems to really “get it.” I also don’t really like to use the phrase “tries too hard,” because I don’t think that is possible, but the sentiment behind the phrase might be something to think about with her poetry.

I do love Sheeler’s ability to ground most of her images though, like Bloch does in *Blood Honey*. There is a grit to “Pickup Line” with the “features blank as Barbie’s,” and “his mayo / and his day-old beard.” This extends to how she grounds the images, and I think a lot of that can be attributed to her staying in relatively “safe” stanza formations. Again, I’m conflicted; this allows her to be more real and a better communicator, but it also shows she isn’t willing to try new things or push these realities into the more uncomfortable. And now that I think on it, perhaps trying a different structure would make the more abstract poems more comprehendible.
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