As usual the story is full of holes. Large, gaping holes this time. In the first few scenes Glory is worried about what is going on at the store but she has time to have a full conversation with Lucky, take a shower, and then have a phone conversation. It would have been just as easy to say, "Excuse me a minute while I run to the store and check in." The store is mostly forgotten through the latter part of the book.

As usual the book is wrapped up in a nice little bow with nothing being resolved. Glory takes the most passive way possible to resolve her problems while somehow thinking she has come out looking like a shining star. I have no idea what direction these books are going in and I'm afraid the author does not either.