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Bittersweet by Sarah Ockler

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Feb 16, 12

bookshelves: sports, did-not-finish

My order of preference of Sarah Ockler books seems to be: Twenty Boy Summer, then Fixing Delilah, then Bittersweet. *sigh* What is wrong with me??? BITTERSWEET had a great premise, a unique setting, and even athletes (skating). And yet I wasn't completely charmed in the way that I have to be with books. I liked that BITTERSWEET is about ice skaters and hockey players, but I couldn't get behind the characters. I can understand why Hudson needed to escape her old life after her parents' divorce, but I wasn't a fan of the person she became--or perhaps she was always this way? Hudson often goes into these stream-of-consciousness-like monologues, which, for me, added nothing to the story, and only encouraged me to skim. And once I started skimming, it seemed like I couldn't stop skimming... until I stopped reading altogether.

I usually enjoy the romances that Sarah Ockler writes, but again, I couldn't get behind the one(s?) in BITTERSWEET. Was there supposed to be a love triangle? So why was I so utterly lukewarm on both potential guys, and in fact got a creepster vibe from at least one of them? There's no more "insta-love" than sometimes happens in high school when two people exchange glances or collide into one another, but Hudson's meandering monologues left me entirely disconnected from her character development, to the point where I couldn't care less if any guys liked her or not.

In short: I really enjoyed BITTERSWEET's setting in a small town on Lake Erie, and I enjoyed the athletic aspect of it, but was never invested enough in the characters and their relationships to be inspired to finish reading.

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Reading Progress

01/23/2012 page 78
20.0% "The last time I behaved like Hudson does in the presence of a cute boy was in... oh wait... MIDDLE SCHOOL. Gah."
01/23/2012 page 163
42.0% "The dialogue is really strange. Do teens really speak like this, or this an imagining of what teens speak like?"

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message 1: by Jo (new)

Jo Oh no, is this no good? I'm in two minds about it :(


message 2: by Steph Su (new) - added it

Steph Su Jo wrote: "Oh no, is this no good? I'm in two minds about it :("

Did you read it? I wanted to like this one but I couldn't help but feel like the dialogue was stilted and the characters unbelievable.


message 3: by Jo (new)

Jo No, sorry, I meant I'm in two minds about reading it.
On one hand it looks like it could be quite fun but I'm not sure I could stop myself rolling my eyes at everything that was said!


message 4: by Steph Su (new) - added it

Steph Su I think the premise is cute enough (very Sarah Dessen-esque), but the execution didn't live up to what I want out of the books I read. :(


message 5: by Melanie (new)

Melanie Goodman That was about how I felt when reading it. Was not my favorite of Ockler's books by a long shot. Had all the right ingredients, but lingered too long in the world of self pity.


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Steph Su Melanie wrote: "That was about how I felt when reading it. Was not my favorite of Ockler's books by a long shot. Had all the right ingredients, but lingered too long in the world of self pity."

It started out so well, too! Reading the prologue and the first chapter were what made me buy it. I guess I should've read on a little more...


Gabrielle Carolina Okay, what is with us? 'Us' is twins. I just read a few chapters of this and feel very 'meh' towards it. I also disliked 20 Boy Summer, but thought it was the content that didn't sit right with me. Maybe it's the writing, as well. Some styles just don't mesh.


Aleeeeeza in the second para you seem to have accidentally wrote right instead of write. prolly silly of me but it made me sorta crack up :D


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Steph Su Aleeza wrote: "in the second para you seem to have accidentally wrote right instead of write. prolly silly of me but it made me sorta crack up :D"

Gahh. I fixed it (cuz that was stupid). But I'm glad it made you laugh. :)


Aleeeeeza Steph Su wrote: "Aleeza wrote: "in the second para you seem to have accidentally wrote right instead of write. prolly silly of me but it made me sorta crack up :D"

Gahh. I fixed it (cuz that was stupid). But I'm g..."


you should see how many typos i make in a single review. my friends have rechristened me 'the queen of typos'. cause theyre so original :P


message 11: by Steph Su (new) - added it

Steph Su lol, I make typos, too, and grammatical/homonym errors that embarrass me utterly, but I am often too exhausted after writing a review to double-check it. Bad habit!


Aleeeeeza Steph Su wrote: "lol, I make typos, too, and grammatical/homonym errors that embarrass me utterly, but I am often too exhausted after writing a review to double-check it. Bad habit!"

with me it's like, i'm so distracted while double-checking that it ends up being pointless. garrr.

also, i get that whole thing about skimming--once i start doing it in a boring book i keep on doing it until i just give up reading it altogether. hehe.


message 13: by Steph Su (new) - added it

Steph Su Yep, exactly!

In fact, it's happening to me right now. x(


Aleeeeeza Steph Su wrote: "Yep, exactly!

In fact, it's happening to me right now. x("


it happens to me all. the. effing. time. no wonder i get rejected to often on netgalley. i mark more than half of my galleys as unread! :/

its like, before last year, i ALWAYS finished a book. but back then i barely had access to any. and then last year i discovered the fabulous world of ebooks and egalleys and read 250 books, and i've become super picky now. but when you have that many books to read, and are an aspiring writer to boot, you only have time to fully go through a limited no. of books, eh?


message 15: by Steph Su (new) - added it

Steph Su "but when you have that many books to read, and are an aspiring writer to boot, you only have time to fully go through a limited no. of books, eh?"

Exactly. No use wasting your limited time with books you're not going to love.


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