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The Submission by Amy Waldman

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Mar 28, 12

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Read from March 18 to 24, 2012

Amy Waldman had written at least one draft of The Submission before the announcement in late 2009 of plans to build a Muslim community center two blocks from Ground Zero. In a wrenching example of life imitating art, the real controversy that exploded over the proposed center is expressed in the perfectly-timed fiction of her debut novel.

In Waldman's novel, it is not a center openly sponsored by prominent members of New York's Muslim community that has Americans on both sides of the controversy shouting their opinions. It is the revelation that the winner of a competition to design a Ground Zero memorial is Muslim.

The author had guts to tackle a twist in a story that remains a daily part of our national conversation - if even indirectly as we wrestle the continued presence of U.S. troops in Iraq and Afghanistan and debate the tangle of religious freedom, cultural identity and immigration.

Of course, we have been down a similar road as a nation considering how best to honor tragedy through public art. Maya Lin, so young and vulnerable when her design for the Vietnam Veterans Memorial was selected in 1981, faced brutal criticism because she, an Asian-American, reminded us of our shame and loss. And yet, the Vietnam Veterans Memorial has become a national symbol of remembrance, honor, shared grief and healing.

Waldman presents us with this dilemma: How would we respond to a 9/11 memorial that was designed by an American named Mohammed Khan? Waldman seeks to capture the worst of our fears and prejudices, of our ignorance and anger, as well as the best of our ability to forgive and demonstrate fairness and empathy.

Yet, I can't say I appreciate this novel. Perhaps it is because real events continue grip and tear that I feel The Submission offers nothing new to my understanding of and reflection on 9/11. It's an intriguing premise that loses a lot of power right out the gate since the actual competition, which began in 2003 as it does in the novel, proceeded in relative peace- at least to the outsider. The 9/11 Memorial, completed in time for the 10th anniversary of the attacks, was designed by Michael Arad, an Israeli-American.

I feel the author panders to a specific audience, reinforcing stereotypes by making caricatures of her villains and making her protagonists attractive, sympathetic and vulnerable. The themes address and applaud every response that I, a very left-of-center liberal, had in reaction to the attacks and their aftermath. Even in my devastation I feared the vilification of any one who was perceived to be a threat because of their ethnicity, cultural identity or religion. I abhor chest-thumping American bravado; I wailed at the blatant restriction of civil rights in the name of national security; I protested the headless tumble into war. And I still feel the personal repercussions of the political rift that is even deeper now than it was in 2003 when we plunged into Iraq. The novel pats me on the back: religious tolerance, good; bigots, bad. But who is going to read this book? I venture to suggest only liberals like me.

This is a novel of action and plot built around themes of reflection and character development. Perhaps this causes me to feel the disconnect between the power of the supposition and the unsatisfying story. Given Waldman's phenomenal career as a journalist, is it to be expected that she would excel at presenting events and multiple points-of-view, at telling rather than showing. I am left without a real sense of the architect, Mohammed Khan, his motivations or his conflicted sense of personal justice and empathy. Nor can I connect with Claire Burwell, the wealthy widow who served on the selection committee as a representative of the families of 9/11 victims. The ancillary characters - the anti-memorial activists, the Bangladeshi wife of a 9/11 victim, the newspaper hack, the former politician shepherding the design selection committee - offer fascinating sub-plots but feel manufactured.

Or perhaps it's that Waldman's details are so close to the truth that there really isn't a "story" to tell. The old saw 'Truth is stranger than fiction' is cliche writ true; sadly it's also far more compelling, thought-provoking and heart-breaking.

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Reading Progress

03/22/2012 page 100
33.0% "Intriguing but a little clunky." 2 comments
03/22/2012 page 162
54.0% "Appreciating this less with each page. Hard to articulate at this juncture, but somehow this fictional twist to an ongoing story seems mocking & moralizing. The fiction is so black & white simplistic, the reality all the more horrific because of its nuances. Knew I shouldn't have read another 9/11 book... But I will carry on to the end..."

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Julie Going straight against my vow that I would not read another "It happened on 9/11" novel, but, well, there it is.


Jay F The New York Times review convinced me that I should add it to my 2011 list--a decision reinforced by a recent visit to St. Paul's and Ground Zero. Will be interested in your review.


Teresa Lukey This one is a little different. I recommend it all the time, simply for its "think" factor, especially when someone is making inflammatory comments about Muslims. It is one of my favorites.


Julie Thank you for the comments, Teresa- I'll be starting The Submission this evening.

This will be a very interesting read for me. Two GR friends whose reviews I hold in high esteem had very different reactions. One reacted negatively to the writing style/quality, the other very positively to the story's content and impact of themes. In a way, I wish I had not read either review until after I'd finished! That'll learn me :)


Jill Julie, I need to think about your review a little bit. I had a very different reaction to it. For example, I DID have a real sense of Mo Kahn (although admittedly, less so of Claire Burwell). Your review, as always, is thought-provoking and well-reasoned.


Jay F You already know, Julie, that I am one of your fans--for the very reason that Jill writes. Because your reviews are "thought-provoking and well-reasoned." And I should add, well-written. Also like Jill, I will need to reflect a bit on your thoughts. I sense that Jill and I might be more in agreement about the book.


message 7: by Julie (last edited Mar 26, 2012 05:24pm) (new) - rated it 2 stars

Julie This was a difficult review to write and one for which a star-rating system just isn't adequate. Three stars would indicate I liked the book, which I didn't, but two stars seems inordinately harsh given the high quality of execution.

It's hard to be critical of a book that deals with a subject so raw and deeply personal; I know I'm in the minority. I'm genuinely glad the novel has been so well received critically and commercially - the more we engage in a public dialogue about our collective fears, ignorance and prejudice the better the chance we will arrive at the world envisaged by Waldman in the novel's epilogue.


Jill Yes, Jay, we're likely more in agreement. After reflecting on your review, Julie, I harkened back to my own reading experience. Although you correctly say that the memorial was designed in relative peace, shortly afterwards, there was a great deal of discord with the proposed creation of a mosque at Ground Zero. All the elements Ms. Waldman introduces -- the politician, the media, etc. -- came out like vultures and the mosque never was built.

I'm not quite so sure that any work of fiction can contribute to my understanding of 9/11. One book that truly did was non-fiction: The Looming Tower, which was riveting in its reportage.

As always, I respect your views and know that no two passionate readers ever agree on EVERYTHING. Your fierce intelligence and perceptions are on display in this review, as always.


Julie Please don't mistake my dissatisfaction with the book as a rejection of the possibility of Waldman's imagined events. On the contrary. The first and second paragraphs of my review make direct reference to the controversy surrounding the construction of an Islamic cultural-community center near Ground Zero and the relevance of Waldman's novel in light of that controversy. I was with her on the premise. I just didn't care for the way she wrote the story.

I struggle to appreciate much of the contemporary fiction I read- that set in the present or very recent past- and I vowed some time ago to not read any more novels about 9/11, after being so disappointed by those I read except Ian McEwan's Saturday - which did offer me so much to reflect upon. I think it's time I renew my vows ;-)

I love these discussions. Thank you both for taking the time to read my review and offering feedback. Your opinions are among those I value most highly!

Yesterday, I was sent a link to a great (if not a wee bit smug) article from The Atlantic's website: http://www.theatlantic.com/entertainm...

"Read books. As often as you can. Mostly classics." Yeah, I can do that. Need to do much more of the last bit - I think investing more in the Classics will make a better reader and perhaps a better writer out of me. Can't hurt, at any rate!


message 10: by Jill (new) - rated it 5 stars

Jill Yep, sometimes it all comes down to "I just didn't connect." I agree with you about 9/11; most authors simply can't integrate the topic well. I believe there was a book by Jay McInerney that did it reasonably well, but even Lynn Sharon Schwartz, one of my favorites, flubbed it (in my opinion).

I love that you want to tackle the classics. My own "mission" is different; I love to read debut books and often feel exhilarated to "discover" -- for myself -- a new voice. That's what makes reading so much fun; we all gravitate to different things.

I, too, love the discussions and your always perceptive insights...


message 11: by Suzanne (new)

Suzanne The Atlantic article might have gone a little overboard with "Mostly classics," which does sounds little high-brow and maybe a little dull (but they were trying to mimic Michael Pollan). Perhaps it should have been "Plenty of classics. And plenty of good contemporary stuff. And a few guilty-pleasures."

Jill, I applaud your adventurous spirit tackling all those debut works. But don't you have to wade through a lot of mediocre stuff to get to a few worthy ones? What's your system for zeroing in on the good new voices? Seems like it could be like blind dates (yikes!)


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B0nnie The Vietnam Veterans Memorial brings tears to my eyes & I've only seen pictures of it! Great review Julie, many good points.


Julie I like your version better, Suzanne! I appreciated the Michael Pollan riff, too :) What I loved about the article was the emphasis on the reading for the sake of pleasure in words, in the well-constructed phrase, not reading for information, thus excluding magazines/ newspapers.
Guilty pleasures bring a lot of joy. I'm in the midst of one now and it's a great reminder of the joy of reading- to lose oneself in the moment- where nothing exists but what's on the page.
It's definitely about balance; I have a lot of catching up to do with the classics, that is for certain. I've read far more modern writers than those whose works have endured.

Jill, I've discovered several great, new writers through your reviews! It's less the newness of the writer than the contemporary nature of the theme. I'm a great fan of historical fiction - much of it written by modern authors. Looking forward now to Alice Hoffman's The Dovekeepers.


message 14: by Jill (new) - rated it 5 stars

Jill Julie and Suzanne: If a book is mediocre, I put it down after 50-75 pages, which is why so many of my reviews are 4 and 5 stars. I don't bother with the rest. I'm an Amazon Vine reviewer, so I do get "first dibs" on many ARCS (I get to choose 4 per month). And, through other sites -- Shelf Awareness, BookBrowse, FantasticFiction, and y'all here -- I often check out advance buzz before I spring for a book.

I read many classics when I was in grad school (English Lit) but I was so young then; it would be intriguing to see what I think of them now. I want to, but it seems there's never time. I have 100 books on my TBR shelf that linger...and linger...and linger.

Julie, I SO relate to the "lose oneself in the moment when nothing exists but what's on the page." There are times I feel I have tunnel vision; the house could burn down and I'm lost in the world an author creates!


Julie B0nnie wrote: "The Vietnam Veterans Memorial brings tears to my eyes & I've only seen pictures of it! Great review Julie, many good points."

Thank you, Bonnie!!


Julie Jill wrote: "Julie and Suzanne: If a book is mediocre, I put it down after 50-75 pages, which is why so many of my reviews are 4 and 5 stars. I don't bother with the rest. I'm an Amazon Vine reviewer, so I do ..."

Not Enough Time. Oh, I know. So often I ache to turn away from everything and just read, read, read....


message 17: by Jill (new) - rated it 5 stars

Jill Me too! I used to feel "guilty" putting down a book without "giving it a chance", but there are just too many great books out there. If I'm not caught up in it, it's on to the next!


Jay F Jill wrote: "Julie and Suzanne: If a book is mediocre, I put it down after 50-75 pages, which is why so many of my reviews are 4 and 5 stars. I don't bother with the rest. I'm an Amazon Vine reviewer, so I do ..."

I haven't read much post 9/11 literature. Right now, the only book I can think of is O'Neill's "Netherland" and I could never get past the first 100 pages, although I tried 3 times. I saw "The Submission" as less a post 9/11 novel than an exploration of many of the tensions that describe contemporary American society. Her characters were stereotypes. But she charted changes in her characters as well. I think what really set the book apart for me in the 2011 crop of novels I read or read about was it challenged me in my own views of Islam. I mentioned the nature of that challenge in my own review. On another subject, you all (Julie, Suzanne and Jill) might know about the following two web sites already, but if you don't, I have found them valuable for their discussions of new, significant literature: http://www.themillions.com and http://quarterlyconversation.com.


message 19: by Friederike (last edited Mar 29, 2012 06:01am) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Friederike Knabe Julie, I came upon your thoughtful and -provoking review and read through the thread that ensued. I agree with much that you point out and Waldman might speak primarily to those who have similar views to her. Still, my own view was that she succeeded to put various aspects into a fresh context. I met Waldman at a reading here and only decided to read her book later as I reflected what she told us and what had brought her to write a novel, rather than stay in her more familiar territory of journalism. I could relate to Mo Khan very well, less so to Claire. I think she was pretty much stereotyped. Still, this is just to add my voice to those appreciating your review.


Jay F Friederike wrote: "Julie, I came upon your thoughtful and -provoking review and read through the thread that ensued. I agree with much that you point out and Waldman might speak primarily to those who have similar v..."

@Friederike. You wrote: "my own view was that she succeeded to put various aspects into a fresh context." Yes. That was one point I was struggling to make. Thanks.


message 21: by Jill (new) - rated it 5 stars

Jill Wow, thanks, Jay! I knew about The Millions,but not about Quarterly Conversation. Just bookmarked both. (For what it's worth, I did not LOVE Netherland either).


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